THEY
FADE IN:
INT. BEDROOM -
DAY
Tiny golden
wheels and gears turning lazily upon metal rods. Mechanical pieces. Small and
intricate. Glittering in the sunlight.
REVEAL
The gears are
turning within an ANTIQUE DESK CLOCK sitting on a book shelf, a small pendulum
swinging back and forth behind the glass housing.
The room is
barren except for a pair of open suitcases and a bed that's been stripped.
Sitting on the mattress is ...
JULIA LEVIN
...
Smart and
clever. Dressed in a graduation gown and staring out the window. She seems to be
lost in thought, immobile, until the bedroom door swings open and ...
CONNOR LEVIN,
aged seventeen and wearing a suit and tie, steps inside.
CONNOR
Dad says we
gotta get moving. We're late.
JULIA
I'm getting
ready.
CONNOR
You're sitting
on the bed.
JULIA
(dryly)
Thanks for
clearing that up. I'll be right down.
He steps
out.
Julia takes a
framed picture out of her suitcase -- a candid shot of herself standing with her
MOTHER, forties, a healthy and vibrant woman.
JULIA (cont'd)
Sure do miss
you.
Above her, a
CEILING FAN rotates. Creating a soft HUMMING.
EXT. WESTWOOD -
APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
Julia walks out
of the building where her father, GUY LEVIN, an older man with a kind face,
waits. Connor is checking his reflection in the car window, adjusting his tie,
fussing with his hair.
GUY
You ready?
JULIA
All set. I
packed up everything.
(remembering)
Oh, except
Mom's clock -- I think there's something wrong with it. It's not telling the
right time.
GUY
I'll get it
fixed. Probably just needs a few new parts.
Guy smiles at
Julia for a moment. Very warmly.
GUY (cont'd)
You look just
like your mother.
Julia is
momentarily uncomfortable. But she recovers, smiles and kisses her father on the
cheek.
JULIA
We'll be
late.
EXT. UNIVERSITY
OF CALIFORNIA, LOS ANGELES - CAMPUS - DAY
Students
dressed in graduation caps and gowns are gathered on the campus grounds.
Julia stands by
herself, taking pictures with a professional Nikon camera. She focuses the
camera upon ...
TERRY ALBA, 22,
beautiful and sexy. Very particular and demanding. She smiles perfectly as Julia
snaps the picture. But her boyfriend, SAM BURNSIDE, cute and mischievous,
sporting pink hair and loud clothes, makes a face.
Winding her
film, Julia searches a moment, then smiles. Raising her camera lens, she snaps a
picture of ...
PAUL LOOMIS
...
Early twenties.
Dark hair. Strapping and perfectly handsome. He wears a blue and gold striped
tie with his starched white shirt and graduation gown.
He kisses her.
Passionate and gentle.
PAUL
You packed
up?
JULIA
Ready to move
in. I'll be storing some of the stuff you've already got. Television. CD player.
Microwave.
PAUL
(suggestively)
Bed.
Julia smiles at
him.
JULIA
Bed.
PAUL
Med School
doesn't start until August. At least not for the freshmen, so we've got plenty
of time to see Europe, take the car trip up north ...
JULIA
I hope it won't
be a drag. There's a lot of stuff to move out of my mother's cabin.
PAUL
Our friends
will be there. It'll be fun.
JULIA
I hope so.
Beat.
PAUL
You okay?
JULIA
Tense.
PAUL
Would it help
if I massaged your breasts?
JULIA
No.
PAUL
Because it
would help me.
JULIA
(stifling
laughter)
Maybe
later.
The students
start forming into lines.
JULIA (cont'd)
Hey, I saw your
Mom and kid sister. Where's your Dad?
Beat.
PAUL
He's not
coming.
JULIA
But it's your
graduation.
Paul shrugs
again. A brief sting of hurt on his face.
PAUL
Wasn't a good
enough reason in High School either.
Paul looks
away. Julia knows how painful this is and won't insult him by trying to diminish
it.
Julia smiles
and runs her finger across his tie knot.
JULIA
I like your
tie. UCLA colors.
PAUL
School spirit.
I am a Bruin.
The lines start
moving towards the stadium. Hundreds of CHEERS rise up from the graduating
students.
As she walks, a
sound draws Julia's attention. Standing on the lawn is a SMALL BOY, no more than
four years-old, SOBBING and clinging to his mother's legs.
Julia stops
walking as she gazes at the child. The line comes to a halt behind her.
PAUL
(cont'd)
Julia. We can't
graduate unless you move.
JULIA
Sorry.
She stalks
walking again. Paul puts his arms around her.
EXT. SAM'S
HOUSE - GARDEN - DAY
A big,
traditional house nestled in the hills. PARENTS and graduating STUDENTS exchange
polite conversation in the yard.
EXT. SAM'S
HOUSE - BACK PORCH - DAY
Sitting between
a pair of open french doors is "the gang" consisting of Julia and Paul and Terry
and Sam. They throw around conversation, ignoring the party.
TERRY
It's secluded?
Nobody said anything to me about the cabin being secluded.
JULIA
I said it was a
cabin in the woods. I thought seclusion was a given.
TERRY
I'm no good out
in the woods. You know what lives in the woods? Animals that sting. Animals that
bite.
PAUL
So avoid the
animals.
JULIA
I really
appreciate you guys helping me. I couldn't move everything alone.
SAM
Hey, it's our
last chance to be together. Terry and I are excited.
(turns)
Aren't we,
Ter?
She's not
excited.
TERRY
Can I bring my
cotton bedsheets to the cabin? If I try to sleep in anything but cotton, I get
hives.
JULIA
Whatever makes
you happy.
Sam grabs a
large drawing pad from the steps. He opens it.
SAM
Speaking of
which, I've got your graduation gift. As specified.
JULIA
Let's see.
Sam holds up a
sketch of Clark Kent changing to Superman.
SAM
Like it?
JULIA
It's great.
Thanks Sam.
Paul checks out
the drawing. His nose crinkles.
PAUL
Superman? Why'd
you want a drawing of Superman?
JULIA
He's very
attractive.
PAUL
(staring)
You're
kidding.
JULIA
No.
PAUL
He's not even
real.
JULIA
I think most
women tend to wonder if Superman is super in every way.
TERRY
I don't.
PAUL
You see. There
goes your argument.
TERRY
(thoughtfully)
But Spiderman
has a nice ass.
Off everyone's
LOOK --
TERRY (cont'd)
What?
INT. SAM'S
HOUSE - BATHROOM - DAY
Julia finishes
washing her hands. Dries them. Grabbing her camera and the drawing, Julia opens
the bathroom door ...
INT. SAM'S
HOUSE - HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
... and
freezes. Standing within an open bedroom is ...
A BLOND
STUDENT.
Another college
graduate. Tan and attractive. Dressed exactly like Paul -- identical white
shirt, gold and blue striped tie. He pulls off his tie and unbuttons his
shirt.
Julia doesn't
move.
The student
peels off his shirt. Her eyes are drawn to a Superman "S" insignia tattooed on
his shoulder.
The student
catches sight of Julia in the hallway. Her face turns bright red immediately.
She starts to laugh.
He smiles at
her. A bit flattered. Flirting.
STUDENT
Changing into
something more formal.
He holds up a
pair of ripped jeans.
Julia backs
down the hallway. Still laughing. Embarrassed.
JULIA
I'm sorry. I
was just using the ...
(laughs)
Really. I'm
sorry.
STUDENT
I'll forgive
you this once.
She quickly
leaves.
The blond
student watches her go. A grin on his face.
EXT. SAM'S
HOUSE - BACK YARD - DAY
Julia walks out
the back door. Stifling her laughter.
Paul is talking
with Guy on the lawn. Julia SNAPS a picture of them together, winds her film,
and notices ...
A LITTLE GIRL
...
Sweet and
innocent. Sitting on a bench. Motionless.
Julia walks
towards her. The little girl is staring across the lawn at a pool shed.
Transfixed. A group of children are playing on the grass in front of it.
The girl
becomes aware of Julia's presence and turns around.
JULIA
Hi.
GIRL
(quiet)
Hi.
Silence.
JULIA
You sitting
here all by yourself?
The girl slowly
nods "Yes."
JULIA (cont'd)
Don't you want
to play with the other kids?
The girls
shakes her head "No."
JULIA (cont'd)
Want me to
leave you alone?
The girl shakes
her head "No."
More
silence.
JULIA (cont'd)
Want to mix
this up and ask me something?
The little girl
notices the camera.
GIRL
Are you taking
pictures for Sam's family?
JULIA
No, I'm just
...
(then)
I'm a friend of
Sam's. But I'm also a photographer. I take pictures.
Beat.
GIRL
Will you take a
picture of me?
JULIA
Why?
GIRL
So you won't
forget me.
JULIA
(surprised)
Why would I
forget you?
GIRL
Because they're
coming for me.
A long beat.
Julia sits next to her.
JULIA
Who is?
GIRL
The
monsters.
JULIA
What
monsters?
GIRL
There. Behind
the door.
The girl points
towards the pool shed. The rusted door of the shed is slightly open. Just a
crack.
JULIA
Those other
kids don't look too scared.
GIRL
They should
be.
Beat.
JULIA
(playing
along)
So how come
only you can see them?
THE GIRL LEANS
FORWARD AND SPEAKS IN A HUSHED WHISPER.
GIRL
Because I know
they're real. I used to have a little brother, but they came and got him.
Now my parents say I never had a brother before.
(pause)
Soon ... my
parents won't remember me either.
Something about
the girl's tone of voice is unnerving. As if she's resigned herself to this.
A slight wind
HISSES through the trees. The girl rises.
GIRL (cont'd)
I gotta go.
They know I'm talking about them.
JULIA
Wait a
second.
Julia SNAPS a
picture of the girl.
JULIA (cont'd)
Feel
better?
The girl stares
at her.
GIRL
Are you scared
of monsters?
JULIA
No.
Beat.
GIRL
I am.
The girl turns
and runs across the lawn.
Julia is left
sitting on the bench. She glances over at the pool shed again. Raises her camera
and focuses on the door which is still cracked open.
She snaps the
picture.
CLICK!
INT. PAUL'S
APARTMENT - NIGHT
Julia and Paul
are romantically entangled as they enter the apartment. A little drunk. Kissing
and frolicking. She strips off his jacket and tie. Paul abruptly stops.
PAUL
Wait a minute
...
(grabbing
both sides of his shirt)
This is a job
for ...
Paul rips his
shirt wide open. Buttons popping everywhere. They both start laughing. Joining
together, he guides her towards the bathroom.
The wind gently
HISSES on the balcony. Windchimes spinning.
INT. BATHROOM -
NIGHT
A cloud of hot
steam. The soothing rush of warm water running over tanned and naked skin.
Julia stands
underneath the shower, her body relaxing into Paul's chest, his muscular arms
encircling her body, his lips buried in her neck and shoulders. Her eyes are
shut. Her expression is calm.
INTERCUT -
BLOND STUDENT
Standing in the
guest bedroom at Sam's house. Young and muscular. Bathed in sunlight. The tattoo
on his shoulder.
BACK TO
JULIA
Her eyes still
pressed closed. Smiling a little.
Water continues
rushing from the shower head, creating a HISS that eventually becomes THE ROAR
OF THE OCEAN.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PACIFIC
COAST HIGHWAY - DUSK
The setting sun
blushes crimson across the rolling waves of the Pacific. Streaking along the
highway is a RANGE ROVER, packed with luggage, headlights on.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - DUSK
Paul sits
behind the wheel. He's bopping and RAPPING with Sam to HIP-HOP that BLARES from
the speakers. Very energized.
Julia sits on
the passenger side, leaning against the window, trying to shut out the music.
Terry looks just as miserable. Finally, Julia turns off the radio.
A silent beat.
The guys catch their girlfriends' expressions.
PAUL
Sorry.
SAM
(overlapping)
Sorry.
Terry leans
forward between the seats.
TERRY
So the cabin
has electricity, right? And plumbing? Everything we need?
JULIA
Uh-huh.
TERRY
So it has
everything.
JULIA
It has
everything.
SAM
Wait a minute.
I hear a shoe about to drop.
JULIA
Except a
phone.
SAM
BAM! There it
is.
TERRY
(scandalized)
I need a phone.
It's like family to me. Mom, Dad, my brother .... phone.
JULIA
So you're
roughing it.
TERRY
The last time I
tried to rough it, I was in therapy for a year. Why didn't your mother have a
phone?
JULIA
I guess she
wanted to be left alone.
At least until
she got sick.
Paul looks to
her.
PAUL
This won't be
too hard on you, will it?
Staying at her
place?
JULIA
It's okay. I'm
enjoying this.
Julia smiles at
him. Paul smiles back.
PAUL
Good.
He switches the
radio back on and continues RAPPING with Sam. Julia and Terry both stare
straight ahead, ears pounding. This is turning into a LONG trip.
EXT. FOREST
ROAD - NIGHT
Paul's Range
Rover makes its way down a long, winding road. The Rover's headlights illuminate
the woods lining the road on both sides.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - NIGHT
The inside of
the Range Rover is dark. Only the faint glow from the dashboard lights provides
any ambient illumination. Sam and Terry are snuggled together in the back seat.
Everything is quiet.
Julia is
thinking. Finally, she breaks the silence.
JULIA
Do you believe
in monsters?
A beat.
Everyone else in the car trades looks.
PAUL
We've been in
the car too long.
JULIA
I'm just
asking.
PAUL
Like what? The
Boogeyman?
JULIA
The Boogeyman.
The thing under the bed. The monster hiding in the closet.
TERRY
What made you
think of that?
JULIA
A little girl
at Sam's house. She was convinced there was a monster trying to get her.
PAUL
You're saying
you believe her?
Julia is
suddenly on the spot. She backtracks.
JULIA
Of course I
don't. There are no monsters. Not really.
SAM
Sure there are.
Ted Bundy. Son of Sam.
Ed Gein.
TERRY
Who was Ed
Gein?
SAM
He was a mass
murderer. This old hermit who'd kill people and take the parts he wanted. Heads.
Livers. Intestines. Sex organs.
TERRY
Why did he use
the parts for?
SAM
Everything. The
police found a skull that was used for a soup bowl. Faces were stuffed and
mounted like hunting trophies on the wall. Bones were used for furniture.
PAUL
He also wore
their skin. Like clothes.
Terry recoils
into her seat. Grossed out.
TERRY
Sorry I
asked.
SAM
You wanted
proof. There it is.
JULIA
But it's not
like he's a monster under the bed.
SAM
So?
JULIA
So why are kids
afraid of that?
SAM
Because they
live in a completely different world than we do.
(then)
Think about it.
Why do kids pick up on things that we can't? ... Bumps in the night? ...
footsteps in the hallway? ... A thumping inside their closet?
PAUL
Overactive
imagination.
SAM
Wrong. Perfect
awareness.
(beat)
Kids have a
perfect awareness of everything around them. Every sound. Every
shadow.
Everything gets
quiet.
SAM (cont'd)
The Boogeyman
could be real. So could monsters. Just because you've never seen them doesn't
mean they aren't there.
Silence. The
car engine purrs softly. This is starting to make sense. And it's spooky.
PAUL
All right. I'm
creeped out. But my bullshit alarm is going off.
SAM
You just can't
handle it.
PAUL
Right. Because
it's bullshit.
JULIA
Serial killers
aside, my take on this subject is very simple. If I don't have a picture of it
-- it's not real.
TERRY
Okay, is this
conversation like a radio station? Can we just change the channel? Because
personally, I'd like to get to sleep tonight.
Terry has just
finished saying these words, when --
AN ANIMAL runs out of the woods into the
middle of the road. A black shape in the headlights. Eyes flashing in the
dark.
PAUL
JESUS
CHRIST!
Paul SLAMS on
the brakes. Too late.
WHAM! The RANGE ROVER SMASHES into it,
throwing the shape into a ditch at the side of the road.
The Range Rover
swerves and comes to a SQUEALING HALT.
INSIDE THE
ROVER
Everyone
catches their breath. A moment of dead silence.
PAUL
(cont'd)
Everyone
okay?
TERRY
(nods)
We're fine.
JULIA
What was
that?
PAUL
I think it was
a dog.
Julia unlocks
her door.
JULIA
We'd better
check the car.
She steps out
of the Rover. The others follow.
EXT. FOREST
ROAD - NIGHT
The hazard
lights are switched on. Paul walks around to the front of the Rover.
The bumper is
dented.
PAUL
Look at that.
There's a couple thousand dollars out of my wallet.
TERRY
You can
probably get someone to pop it back.
PAUL
Sure. For a
couple hundred dollars.
Sam looks down
the road. He can barely make out a large form resting lifeless in the ditch.
He starts
walking towards it.
JULIA
I'm sorry about
your car, Paul ...
PAUL
(begrudging)
Yeah, well.
Shit happens.
The
conversation becomes distant as Sam walks slowly up the road, moving past the
yellow flashing HAZARD LIGHTS which CLICK rhythmically ... click, click, click
...
Sam approaches
the ditch. Darkness is all around.
.... click ...
click ... click ...
He kneels down
alongside the body of the animal. Very little is visible of the corpse except
for its dark, mangled form sprawled across the dirt.
Sam picks up a
stick and pokes at the body. Nothing happens.
He pokes at the
corpse again.
The hind legs
of the corpse suddenly twitch. A reflex action. Sam leaps back. The life nearly
scared out of him.
A flap of
hairless skin slides away from one of the animal's hind legs. Sam leans forward
to get a better look, becoming simultaneously repulsed and fascinated.
SAM
Hey guys!
PAUL
What?
SAM
Take a look at
this.
JULIA
Is it a
dog?
Sam glances at
the dead corpse and back to his friends again. He looks shaken.
SAM
I don't
know.
The rest of the
group moves down the road. A weird unease has started to settle in.
Paul and Julia
kneel down in front of the corpse. It's almost unrecognizable. The darkness
smothering the road keeps them from getting a handle on any of the body's
features.
PAUL
It looks like a
dog to me.
SAM
Did you see the
leg?
PAUL
What about
it?
Sam takes the
stick and gently pushes away the flap of torn skin for a better look. The group
leans forward.
A deep bleeding
wound has been exposed. Through the torn flesh and blood pumping over charcoal
skin, the group can see bones flashing into the moonlight. But intermingled with
the animal's skeleton are ...
PIECES OF METAL
...
Glittering and
clean. A series of connected stainless steel threads and pallid bone that have
grown together.
SAM
Ever seen
anything like that?
PAUL
No.
SAM
It looks like
steel. Like someone put steel into its body.
PAUL
I don't think
it was put in there. It looks like it grew that way.
JULIA
That's
impossible. What kind of animal has steel in its skeleton?
Terry steps
forward tentatively.
TERRY
What are you
looking at?
JULIA
Are you sure
it's dead?
PAUL
Come on, honey.
It's a dog. Not a zombie.
SAM
Julia? Where's
your camera?
JULIA
It's in the
car.
PAUL
I've got
it.
Paul races back
to the Range Rover and opens the passenger door. He withdraws Julia's
camera.
Julia takes a
step back into the middle of the road. The wind is sifting through the trees,
creating a soft HISSING noise as the branches dance and twist in the
shadows.
Paul returns
and hands the camera to Sam.
SAM
You want to
turn it over?
PAUL
I'm not
touching it.
Sam kneels
down. He points the camera and shoots.
The camera
flash cuts through the darkness and falls upon the corpse. But only for a
millisecond of clarity.
Twisted metal.
Skin. Appendages. Madness.
Both of the
young men stand frozen, thunderstruck, staring down at the misshapen shape in
front of them. A long period of amazed silence follows.
SAM
That's wrong.
That's all wrong.
Paul shakes his
head.
PAUL
That's not a
dog.
TERRY
(stunned)
What were those
things coming out of its back?
Paul starts
recoiling. His stomach is getting weak.
PAUL
That's not a
dog.
The cool summer
wind WHISTLES through the trees around them.
SAM
(sickened)
That doesn't
even make sense.
JULIA
Paul ...
Paul looks over
at her.
JULIA (cont'd)
Let's get in
the car.
SAM
We need some
flashlights.
TERRY
(hushed)
Screw the
flashlights.
SAM
What the hell
is it?
PAUL
Dude. We're
outta here.
Julia and Paul
walk briskly to the Range Rover. Sam and Terry follow them, glancing back over
their shoulders.
SAM
What the hell
is it?!
Paul tosses the
camera into the Rover's back seat. He SLAMS the door shut. Julia opens the front
passenger door.
A soft THUMPING
from the woods. Almost like footsteps.
JULIA
Get in the
car.
Julia hops into
the front seat and SLAMS her door.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - NIGHT
The atmosphere
is quickly turning into panic. Paul jumps behind the wheel as both Sam and Terry
close their doors.
SAM
I want to know
what that thing was.
Paul presses
the automatic door lock. THUNK.
JULIA
Paul, start the
car.
PAUL
Keys ...
He searches his
pockets. They're empty. He checks his jacket.
SAM
I want to know
what it was.
PAUL
Will you shut
up?
Paul fishes out
the car keys from his jacket pocket. He starts the ignition. The engine ROARS to
life.
JULIA
Go.
A heavy THUMP.
Right outside the back window. Sam and Terry instinctively look towards the rear
hatch.
TERRY
There's
something behind the car.
JULIA
GO!
Paul hits the
gas.
EXT. FOREST
ROAD - NIGHT
The Range Rover
disappears into the night.
The calm and
unnerving quiet of the woods are left behind. The wind WHISTLES softly.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- FAST FOOD RESTAURANT - NIGHT
A fast food
joint at the side of the road.
INT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - NIGHT
Everyone is
sitting quietly at a table. Fast food leavings are littered across their plastic
trays. Nobody is saying anything or looking at one another.
Finally ...
SAM
I want to get
the body.
Everyone's face
drops into shock. Paul almost laughs.
PAUL
You do that.
We'll wait for your ass right here.
Sam leans
forward in his seat. Intense.
SAM
Nothing about
that thing looked right. Absolutely nothing. There was metal in its
skeleton.
TERRY
Maybe it wasn't
metal. It might've just looked like metal.
SAM
There were
fucking gears, for Chrissake.
PAUL
Fine. Go back
out there. Do whatever the hell you want. But count me out. I'm done.
JULIA
We've already
got a picture, Sam.
SAM
Let's get a few
more then. I want to get a good look at that thing up close.
TERRY
(adamant)
I'm not going
back there.
SAM
Let Julia
decide. It's her camera.
The group
stares at Julia. She remains silent.
PAUL
Your call.
Julia stares
back at all of them. A moment.
A small CHILD
begins CRYING and SCREAMING in the restaurant. Julia flinches at the unexpected
sound, glancing over at the child's parents as they quiet him down.
She rises from
the table.
JULIA
I have to use
the bathroom.
She walks
straight into the bathroom.
After she's
gone ...
TERRY
I'm not going
back there.
INT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - BATHROOM - NIGHT
Large and
poorly lit. Several closed bathroom stalls face a row of sinks and a huge
mirror.
A toilet
FLUSHES. Julia leaves one of the stalls and pulls the door closed behind her.
She moves to the mirror, washes her hands, and retrieves a brush from her
purse.
Water DRIPS
from one of the leaky pipes in the bathroom while the fluorescent bulb over the
mirror CRACKLES softly. Julia is about to brush her hair, but something unnerves
her. She cocks her head slightly. A feeling.
She turns
around and checks out the bathroom. The doors to the stalls are all closed shut.
Empty and quiet.
She starts
brushing her hair. A few moments pass. Then, she stops and listens to the water
DRIPPING from the pipe. Julia turns back around and looks at the bathroom.
One of the
stall doors all the way at the end is now slightly open. Not much. Just enough
to reveal a patch of darkness and gloom within.
The sound of
water dripping abruptly stops. Silence follows.
Julia looks
like she's about to crawl out of her skin. She quickly shoves her brush back
into her purse and leaves.
INT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - NIGHT
Julia walks
towards her friends as they collect themselves. Everyone is slow getting their
stuff together.
JULIA
I want to
leave.
PAUL
Hold up. We're
coming.
The CHILD
starts CRYING again. Pointing at the bathroom.
This disturbs
Julia further.
JULIA
Paul?
PAUL
Okay. Slow
down.
The group
leaves the table.
EXT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS
The group
emerges from the restaurant. The parking lot is almost deserted. No people are
in sight.
Julia moves
leisurely towards the Range Rover, just ahead of Terry and Sam -- but she'd walk
a lot faster if Paul's arm weren't draped around her shoulder. She looks tight
and nervous. Her eyes scanning the parking lot.
The cars are
empty. Sidewalk litter dances in the wind.
Inside one of the parked cars, a featureless
SHAPE is sitting behind the wheel. The shape turns and stares at
them.
Everyone piles
into the Range Rover. Julia throws a nervous glance back at the SHAPE in the
car.
He's still
watching them.
Everyone piles
into the car.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - CONTINUOUS
Paul starts the
engine and pulls out of the parking lot. Julia relaxes into her seat,
relieved.
EXT. SANTA MIRA - TOWN STREET -
NIGHT
The Range Rover
heads off into the woods.
EXT. CABIN -
NIGHT - ESTABLISHING
A rustic home
surrounded by huge pine trees and beach grass overlooking the ocean. There are
no neighbors in sight. Paul's Range Rover is parked out front.
INT. CABIN -
BASEMENT - NIGHT
The basement is
saturated in a bright red light. Julia is developing a photograph within a small
basin. Paul and Terry are seated on the stairs. Sam is pacing.
SAM
How much
longer?
JULIA
Thirty seconds.
It's coming out.
SAM
I still think
we should get the body.
We could drive
out there, haul it into the car ...
PAUL
I'm not loading
that thing into my car.
I don't give a
shit what it is. It's not coming back here.
Julia lifts the
developed picture out of the basin.
JULIA
Done.
She switches on
the light. The group crowds around her.
SAM
What is it?
What does it look like?
The photograph
is blurred. The body is indistinguishable.
JULIA
Damn.
SAM
What happened
to the picture?
JULIA
Out of
focus.
SAM
What do you
mean it's out of focus? I took the picture. The flash went off.
JULIA
Sam, this is a
professional camera with a zoom lens. You can't just point and shoot.
A quiet moment
as they stare at the picture.
PAUL
Well, so much
for that.
Sam looks at
the picture, then at his friends. With a look of somber frustration, Sam quietly
turns and charges up the stairs, taking two at a time.
After he's gone
...
TERRY
It's not a big
deal. Whatever it was.
(then)
He'll get over
it.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
COASTLINE - BEACH - DAY
Cloudy and
overcast. A set of colorless waves CRASH into the rocks. Sam and Julia and Terry
walk just beyond the rippling surf, arguing with each other.
SAM
I can't get
over it. That thing looked wrong. Completely wrong.
JULIA
Of course it
looked wrong. Paul rammed it with his car.
SAM
What about the
blood? It wasn't red ... it was black -- it was like ... oil coming from
a busted engine.
JULIA
I must've
missed that.
SAM
Let's find it. Cut it up. Study
it.
TERRY
(measured)
Sam, I realize
that you're an extroverted comic book artist and I'm a neurotic. But it's only
now at this moment that I'm wondering why we're dating.
Sam turns back
to Julia --
SAM
I'll pay you to
take me back.
JULIA
You don't have
to pay me. Take the car.
SAM
The Rover's a
shift. I can only drive an automatic.
JULIA
Ask Paul.
SAM
He's out
running. Besides, you heard him last night. He'd never do it.
Julia stares at
him.
JULIA
It's a dead
animal.
SAM
So come with
me. You take the pictures this time. If it's just a dead animal, then you're
right and I'm wrong. But if it's not, we've got a picture of it.
JULIA
A picture of
what?
Beat.
SAM
A monster.
A set of
foaming waves HISS as they slide along the sand.
Julia stands
with her arms folded. There's something really creepy about it which she doesn't
want to admit.
JULIA
Monsters don't
exist.
SAM
What...?
(pause)
Sayin' yes ...
or saying no?
Julia stares at
him, deadpan. Sam just stares right back.
EXT. FOREST
ROAD - DAY
The same lonely
stretch of road from the night before.
The Range Rover
appears around a corner and pulls over to the side of the road. Julia opens her
door, camera in hand, and gets out. Sam follows her lead.
SAM
This is it?
JULIA
I think so. You
can see the way the road turns sharply to the left. The rest of the drive was
straight.
SAM
You've got
film, right?
JULIA
A new roll. You
can have all the pictures you want.
Julia and Sam
start searching the ditch. Feet crunching in the dirt. Moving away from the
car.
A soft THUMP
echoes from somewhere in the woods. A place just beyond the wall of pine
branches and shrubbery that shivers in the breeze.
Sam and Julia
look around. They wait. Nothing. Nobody.
SAM
(slight
grin)
The Boogeyman
lives here.
JULIA
So will you if
you keep talking like that.
They keep
walking. A beat passes.
SAM
Julia? Can I
ask you something?
JULIA
Go ahead.
SAM
Last night on
the road, after I took the picture and we started walking to Paul's car, did you
have the same feeling?
JULIA
What
feeling?
SAM
That we were
being chased.
Julia doesn't
say anything.
She stops cold
in her tracks. Just ahead of her, resting motionless in the ditch, is ...
A BODY ...
Swathed in dark
fur, twisted at a pathetic angle, huge gashes in its side. The corpse of a Doberman pinscher. Flies are BUZZING
and swarming over the dog's open wounds.
Julia and Sam
move towards the dog's lifeless form.
JULIA
There's your
monster.
SAM
That's a
dog.
JULIA
Right.
Sam kneels in
front of the corpse. Waves off some flies.
SAM
That's not what
I saw.
JULIA
I don't see any
other corpses on the side of the road, do you?
A long moment.
Sam stares back down at the Doberman's body.
SAM
That's not what
I saw.
CLOSE ON THE
DOG
Eyes slightly
open. A misshapen form plagued with flies.
The sound of
INSECTS SWARMING drowns out the WIND HISSING through the trees.
EXT. FOREST -
WALKING TRAIL - DAY
Paul is jogging
through the woods. A light mist hangs in the cool air. The sounds of the forest
surround him.
Suddenly, the
birds stop singing. Paul becomes aware of this. He stops running and looks
around. The forest is deathly still.
The sound of a
TWIG being crushed underfoot. Then nothing.
Another moment.
Paul keeps going, a chill on his spine, looking back over his shoulder.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- TOWN SQUARE - DAY
A picture
postcard community consisting of quaint storefront shops and manicured
parks.
Paul stands
right in front of a freshly painted realty office building with a picketed
fence, sipping a Coke, watching a HOMELESS WOMAN across the street screaming and shouting at traffic. She's right next
to the parked Range Rover.
Julia walks out
of the realty office.
PAUL
Finished?
JULIA
Done. The cabin
has a buyer.
PAUL
What about the
movers?
JULIA
They're coming
on Sunday afternoon so we'll have to start packing.
The homeless
woman starts walking off down the sidewalk. Moving away from the Rover's parking
space.
PAUL
Good. She's
leaving. I thought we were gonna have to make a run for the car.
JULIA
I feel sorry
for those people.
PAUL
Me too. But
that doesn't mean I want to get screamed at.
JULIA
People are
ignoring her. Maybe that's the only way she can get attention.
PAUL
She's doing a
good job. Kept me away.
They start
crossing the street towards the car.
JULIA
How does
someone end up like that?
PAUL
I think we're
witnessing it first-hand with Sam. What did you guys find on the road
anyway?
JULIA
A dog.
Paul stares at
her. Surprised.
PAUL
Really?
JULIA
Yeah.
Personally, I'm glad we didn't find Frankenstein's monster.
PAUL
You just like
being right.
JULIA
(grins)
Damn
straight.
EXT. CABIN -
WALKING TRAIL - DAY
Sam heads away
from the cabin, his drawing sketch pad under his arm, moving into the woods.
INT. CABIN -
BASEMENT - DAY
A picture is
lifted out of the developing basin. The shot of the little girl from the party.
Her expression is distant. Tortured.
Bathed in the
red light, Julia gazes at the picture for a moment, then places it to the side.
She goes to work on the next piece of developing paper into the basin. She
waits. Rocks the basin a bit.
The TIMER in
the basement TICKS.
The picture
starts to manifest. The photo of the children and pool shed at Sam's house.
Julia frowns
slightly. Something is wrong with the photograph as the details become more
tangible. She lifts the photo out of the basin. Mystified.
CLOSE ON: THE
PHOTO
Standing just inside the shed's door is a
BLURRED FIGURE. Featureless. Barely distinguishable. Hiding in the
dark.
EXT. WOODS -
WALKING TRAIL - DAY
Sam is sitting
on a fallen tree trunk, sketching on his drawing pad with a feverish
intensity.
CLOSE ON: THE
DRAWING
A rough drawing
of the animal's leg, intertwined with steel rods and metal threads which
culminate in a large pulley where the hip bone should be.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
A warm and
comfortable cabin. Simple and subdued.
Paul is seated
on the couch, typing into his powerbook which is hooked up into a phone jack in
the wall. Julia stands next to him, holding the photograph.
JULIA
I've never seen
anything like this before. I thought it might be a flaw in the negative, but now
I'm not so sure. Will you take a look?
PAUL
(not
paying attention)
Okay.
He keeps
watching.
JULIA
Today.
PAUL
I'm busy.
JULIA
You're in a
chat room with a bunch of strangers.
PAUL
(defensive)
They're
friends.
JULIA
Oh yeah? What
are their last names?
They sit face
to face. Paul is speechless for a moment, then impatiently takes the photograph
and looks at it.
PAUL
I don't see
anything.
He puts the
photo down and gets back to the chat room.
JULIA
You didn't even
look.
PAUL
(he
didn't)
I looked.
JULIA
There's
somebody in the shed. I couldn't see it when I took the picture, but now it's
there.
PAUL
I know. Usually
when you take a picture, you can't see a blur.
Paul smiles at
her. Completely smug. Julia stares right back.
JULIA
Give your
"friends" my best.
Julia takes the
photograph and leaves. Paul types into his computer: "JULIA SENDS HER BEST." The
message pops up next to his user name. Within seconds, several other user names
in the chat room respond with "WHO'S JULIA???"
INT. KITCHEN -
NIGHT
Terry is
sitting on the counter, twirling her hair and chatting on a CELL PHONE. Julia
enters the kitchen.
TERRY
(on
the phone)
I'm not
kidding, Dana. There's no phone.
(beat)
There's a jack
and the phone line works, but there's no phone. Uh-huh. Paul was
able to get on the internet. I'm using his cell.
JULIA
(quietly)
I need you to
look at something.
Terry nods.
TERRY
Hold on.
JULIA
Here.
Julia holds out
the picture. Terry looks it over briefly.
TERRY
(polite)
Nice
picture.
She gets back
to her phone conversation.
TERRY (cont'd)
I'm back.
(beat)
I don't know if
he has any free minutes, but he definitely won't after this conversation.
Uh-huh. Thank God for AirTouch.
Frustrated,
Julia takes the picture and leaves the kitchen.
EXT. CABIN -
FRONT PORCH - NIGHT
The air is
completely still. A hush has fallen. The only sound is the ocean and crickets chirping in the grass.
Julia wanders
outside holding some of the developed photographs from the party. Sam is sitting
on the front steps, working on his drawing.
JULIA
Sam? Could you
look at...
Sam looks up
from his drawing pad.
SAM
What?
Beat.
JULIA
Never mind.
Julia sits on
the porch glider and looks through the photos. The little girl looking back over
her shoulder. The blurred shape inside of the shed.
A moment
passes. Julia shuts her eyes as a slight breeze comes up. She slips into a
dream-like state, calm and relaxed, before opening her eyes to find ...
THE BLOND
STUDENT
Sitting back on
the hood of a sports car. Wearing a white tank top undershirt. The tattooed "S"
insignia visible on his shoulder. Bathed in soft moonlight. He even looks good
in the dark.
Their eyes
meet. Smiles are traded between them. The wind sifts gently over the porch.
It's all very
dream-like.
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - NIGHT
A spacious
bedroom. Typical.
Julia is
already in bed and wearing a night shirt. Paul is grinding out a set of
crunches.
JULIA
It just would
have been nice if somebody had looked at it. You were on the internet. Terry was
on the phone. I felt like I was living with a bunch of machines instead of
people.
PAUL
Someone's
overreacting.
JULIA
Would you look
at it again?
PAUL
I already did.
And I still don't see anything.
Paul gets into
bed.
JULIA
That little
girl said there was a monster in the shed.
PAUL
(kisses
her)
It was probably
another dog. Good night.
He switches off
the light. Paul turns over and goes to sleep.
Julia sits for
a moment in the dark. Alone with her thoughts. She looks over at the walk-in
closet across the room.
The closet door
is slightly open. Just a crack. Not enough to provide any clear view of what
lies within, but just enough for something -- monsters included -- to peek
out.
Julia stares at
the closet. Spooked. She knows better, but it's dark and her primal fears are
taking control.
JULIA
(to
herself)
Stupid.
She gets out of
bed and tiptoes to the closet, shutting the door. Then she gets back into bed.
Smiling to herself, she goes to sleep.
EXT. CABIN -
NIGHT
The wind is
picking up. Trees rustle.
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - NIGHT
The clock on
the night table reads 3:15 AM. Julia turns over in her sleep and stirs awake.
She groggily looks over towards the closet. Julia practically sits up in
bed.
The closet door is wide open.
A childhood
nightmare come to life. Julia's breathing quickens. She reaches towards the
other side of the bed.
JULIA
(a
whisper)
Paul?
Her hand finds
nothing but sheets and empty space. There's nobody there. She quickly turns to
locate her boyfriend. But he's gone.
She tries to
switch on the light. CLICK.
The light stays
off. She tries again. CLICK.
Nothing
happens.
Then, she hears
it. A faint sound. Almost like a shuffling. The sound of something
dragging itself lightly across the floor to the edge of the bed.
Julia's throat
has gone dry. Carefully, she creeps towards Paul's side of the bed and checks
the floor.
There is
nothing in sight. The only sign of movement are the shadows from the trees
outside.
There is only
one place left to look. Julia cautiously steps down to the floor. Sinking down
on her knees, she gently lifts up the dust ruffle and looks into the inky
darkness underneath the bed. The space is empty.
Julia drops the
dust ruffle and sits up, GASPING.
A BLACK SHAPE
IS STANDING BEHIND HER.
Then, a
familiar voice comes from it.
PAUL
Hey ... it's
just me.
Paul switches
on the light. He's wearing a UCLA sweatshirt.
JULIA
The light
wouldn't turn on.
PAUL
Works now.
Julia catches
her breath. The fear finally draining from her.
JULIA
Where were
you?
PAUL
I was cold so I
got a sweater from the closet. And I went to the bathroom. Why were you looking
under the bed?
Julia isn't
quite sure how to answer. She's embarrassed.
JULIA
I thought there
was something in the room.
PAUL
(skeptical)
Something? Like
what?
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY
SHRRRIIIIPPP.
Packing tape is pulled back from a roll.
Julia finishes
taping up a cardboard box. Terry is packing some books into another box of her
own.
TERRY
You thought there was a monster in the room? And
you admitted it?
JULIA
I didn't know
what else to say.
TERRY
Advice. When
you don't know what else to say, you lie.
JULIA
But I really
did hear something.
TERRY
You're worse
than my boyfriend.
Julia looks
towards the front door.
Sam is sitting
on the porch steps, sketching on his pad, oblivious to everything around
him.
JULIA
He's in his own
world, isn't he?
TERRY
That's an
understatement. I have a sinking feeling that sex is out of the question for
this trip.
This sparks
something in Julia. She hesitates, looking through an open doorway where Paul
can be seen packing some clothes. Julia speaks to Terry in confidence.
JULIA
Do you
fantasize about other people?
TERRY
If I haven't
yet, I probably will by the time we're ready to leave.
Hesitant
beat.
JULIA
I've been
fantasizing about a guy.
TERRY
Anyone we
know?
JULIA
Blond. Good
looking. Nice body.
TERRY
I'd like to
know that.
JULIA
(hushed)
He has a
Superman tattoo on his shoulder.
Terry's mouth
drops. The girls move closer together.
TERRY
No.
JULIA
Yes.
TERRY
No.
JULIA
Yes.
TERRY
When did this
start?
JULIA
Sam's party. I
walked out of the bathroom and he was changing out of his suit. He lost his tie,
his shirt ... and then he spotted me.
TERRY
What did you
say? Keep going?
JULIA
I got out of
there. But I've been fantasizing about him ever since.
TERRY
Fuck yeah.
Power to the people.
JULIA
But Paul is the
perfect boyfriend. Top to bottom. He's gorgeous. He's smart. He's gonna be a
doctor.
TERRY
(continuing)
He never gets
upset about anything ...
JULIA
What the hell
is wrong with me?
TERRY
It's just a
fantasy.
JULIA
Yeah, but when
I made love to Paul on grad night ... I thought of him.
Terry
stares.
TERRY
Wow.
JULIA
I know. Don't
tell Paul about this. I'd rather not test the whole "he never gets upset about
anything" part.
TERRY
Are you
okay?
JULIA
I don't know. I
think I'm flipping out. Seeing things in pictures. Thinking that there's a
monster in my closet.
TERRY
(rising)
You're being
too sensitive. We woke up with our closet wide open and I'm not upset about
it.
Julia
reacts.
JULIA
Your closet was
open?
TERRY
Having to wash
my hair without an all-natural conditioner. That upsets me.
She walks out.
Julia sits quietly in the living room, left alone with her own puzzled
thoughts.
INT. CABIN -
HALLWAY - DAY
Julia is
walking down the hallway. She happens to pass the bathroom door which is
slightly open.
JULIA'S POV
Within the
bathroom. The BLOND STUDENT is toweling off. Completely naked. The tattoo
plainly visible on his shoulder. His eyes lock on hers.
Julia REACTS,
and runs straight into Paul. She JUMPS.
JULIA
Jesus. You
scared me.
PAUL
I'm sorry.
JULIA
It's okay. I
wasn't looking.
PAUL
I'm going for a
run.
JULIA
Okay. See you
when you get back.
(remembers)
Oh, Paul? Don't
leave the closet door open anymore, all right?
PAUL
(confused)
Huh?
JULIA
The closet.
Last night. You left it open.
PAUL
I closed it
after I got my sweatshirt.
JULIA
Did not.
PAUL
Serious. I
thought you opened it.
JULIA
Wasn't me.
A moment.
PAUL
Well damn,
Julia. Your monster isn't just noisy, he's also inconsiderate.
He kisses her
on the cheek and takes off. Julia stands alone in the empty hallway, a chill
running down her spine.
INT. BEDROOM
CLOSET - DAY
The door slowly
creaks open. Julia stands in the doorway, surveying the closet -- a cluttered
and claustrophobic space despite its size. Clothes draped on hangars. Cardboard
boxes stacked on shelves. Shadows.
Julia moves
inside and pulls a string hanging from a light bulb which acts as a switch.
Tick-tick. The bulb stays dark. She tries again.
Tick-tick.
The light still
won't come on.
Julia carefully
looks through some of the clothes. Nothing. She kneels down and checks the
floor.
A long CREAKING
behind her. The natural light fades.
Julia looks
over her shoulder, a bit skittish, as the closet door eases back towards the
doorjamb. But there's nobody there. Just the faintest hint of a draft.
Julia keeps
searching through the clutter. Moving shoes and boxes out of the way.
Searching.
Then, she spots
something glittering in the ribbon of light coming from the closet doorway. A
small object resting in the corner. Julia reaches down and picks it up ...
A PIECE OF
METAL ...
Small and
intricate with erratic markings. Twisted and strangely ornate. The shape and
texture of the metal is almost completely alien.
Julia holds the
metal into the light. Extremely curious. Behind her, a shadow moves ...
CRASH. Julia
SCREAMS, dropping the object and whirling around as a cardboard box SMASHES down
behind her. Tumbling from one of the shelves above. Old shoes scatter across the
floor.
Julia catches
her breath. Heart pounding.
On the floor,
the metal object sparkles in the light. A draft HISSES through the open closet
door.
EXT. FOREST
ROAD - DAY
The Range Rover
races down the empty road.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - DAY
Julia sits
behind the wheel. Her eyes intense. She looks over at the passenger seat where
both her purse and the metal object are located.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- FOREST ROAD - DAY
The Range Rover
streaks out of the woods towards Santa Mira.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- LIBRARY - DAY
Julia walks up
the front steps leading to the library -- a weathered building that overlooks
the town square. A banner hangs over the front entrance. It reads ...
WELCOME TO THE FOUNDER'S DAY FAIR
INT. LIBRARY -
READING ROOM - DAY
The stacks are
deserted and still. Julia sits at a reading table, flipping through a book,
surrounded by long rows of bookshelves.
INTERCUT - THE
BOOK
Julia flips
from page to page, allowing momentary glimpses of various drawings: vampires,
werewolves, witches, a ghastly thing crawling out from under a maiden's bed.
ON JULIA
as she puts
down the book and grabs another from a stack on the table. She opens it and
starts paging through.
CLOSE ON - THE
BOOK
As Julia finds
a drawing of a sleeping child. Just beyond the bed is an open closet door, the
horrid face a MONSTER watching the child from within.
Julia shivers
down to her soul. A familiar feeling of late.
A slight
SQUEAKING catches her attention. She looks across the reading room to find
--
A YOUNG BOY
Ten years old.
Tow-haired. Sitting a few tables away but almost directly opposite her. He's
wearing a Superman shirt.
He smiles
timidly and waves. Julia waves back.
A THUMP behind
her. Julia turns and looks over her shoulder. She barely catches sight of a
shadow slipping across the wall in the stacks.
The SCRAPING of
chair legs against the cold floor. Julia looks back towards where the BOY was
sitting. The chair is pushed back and empty.
Another
THUMPING in the stacks. Then silence.
A feeling of
anxiety washes over Julia as she grabs some of the books and leaves.
EXT. CABIN -
NIGHT
It's getting
dark. Moonshadows shift across the lawn.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Soft rock seeps
from a pair of portable compact disc player speakers. Paul removes a lid of
grass and some zigzag papers and starts to roll a joint. Everyone looks pretty
toasted. Cardboard boxes and candles are everywhere.
Sam is sitting
off to himself. He's still drawing on his pad. Julia is reading one of the books
from the library.
JULIA
(takes
a hit)
Monsters.
Symbols and dream images. Now you see, I don't agree with that. I think
everything has some kind of physical representation. People can't just come up
with this stuff.
PAUL
You did a good
job last night.
Julia hands him
the metal object from the closet.
JULIA
And this? What
do you make of this?
PAUL
Where'd you
find it?
JULIA
In the closet
you didn't leave open.
TERRY
What's she
talking about?
PAUL
(wearisome)
My girlfriend
believes in the Boogeyman.
JULIA
I never said it
was the Boogeyman. Maybe it's some primeval energy that causes a response in
human beings. This could be the physical representation of that energy.
PAUL
Julia. It's
piece of shit.
TERRY
I disagree.
Julia turns
hopefully to Terry --
JULIA
Yes?
TERRY
It's the
physical representation of a piece of shit.
Pot-induced
laughter. Julia takes back the object.
JULIA
You're not
being objective about this. Have either of you ever been scared? Really
scared?
PAUL
I'm scared
right now that you've smoked too much.
JULIA
Paul ...
PAUL
Okay. Sure.
I've been really scared.
JULIA
Like when?
Beat.
PAUL
Maybe when we
hit the dog.
Sam looks
unsettled.
SAM
You mean
this?
Sam tosses his
sketch pad into the center of the floor. Everyone leans forward, getting a good
look at Sam's detailed drawing of --
THE ANIMAL LEG
...
Completely
fleshed out with distinct mechanical parts hinged into flesh and bone. Almost as
accurate as a photograph.
SAM
(cont'd)
That thing we
hit on the road. It wasn't a dog. It wasn't some primeval force, either.
(then)
It was a
monster.
Julia picks up
the drawing as Paul peers over her shoulder. The picture looks particularly
unsettling in the flickering firelight.
It almost looks
alive.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
It's late. The
fire is dwindling. Terry and Sam have both passed out. Julia relaxes on the
floor, staring at Sam's drawing while resting in Paul's lap.
JULIA
I can't believe
Sam drew this.
PAUL
I can. He's
been acting like a freak.
Beat.
JULIA
You think we
could've been wrong?
PAUL
About what?
JULIA
About the dog.
Maybe the next day when Sam and I went back to the road ... maybe we found the
wrong body.
PAUL
Can we drop
this? Please?
JULIA
I just want to
know ...
PAUL
(clipped)
Stop.
JULIA
I just want to
know what's going on.
PAUL
Nothing's going
on. Here, give me the drawing.
JULIA
I'm not done
yet.
PAUL
Your hands are
shaking. Come on, Julia. Give yourself a break.
She hands the
drawing pad to him. Paul puts it on the couch.
JULIA
We need to talk
about this.
PAUL
Tomorrow. Just
relax.
Paul begins
stroking her hair. Gently and repeatedly.
JULIA
Just for a
minute.
Julia looks
really tired. She closes her eyes for a moment as Paul's steady breathing fills
the room. The she opens them, turns her head and gazes at ...
THE BLOND
STUDENT ...
Sitting in a
chair. Smoking a cigarette. Smiling down at her.
She cranks her
head and looks deeply into her boyfriend's eyes. He smirks and gently strokes
her hair.
JULIA (cont'd)
Nice.
PAUL
(soft)
You're tired.
Go to sleep.
Her breathing
becomes more steady.
In the
distance, a SOUND begins to permeate the cabin ...
THE SOUND OF
MACHINES ...
Grinding and
drumming like the churning of a large factory. A calming and soothing noise, drifting
over ...
DREAM
SEQUENCE - A SERIES OF SHOTS
Quick FLASHES
OF IMAGES which are strung together:
(a) A turbine
driven by a cloud of pumping steam.
(b) The
Superman tattoo on the Blond Student's shoulder.
(c) A Doberman
running across a road.
(d) A man
limping along wearing leg braces and using steel crutches.
(e) A woman's
hands slipping over a young man's bare chest.
(f) A back
brace being locked into place.
INT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - BATHROOM - NIGHT (DREAM SEQ.)
The stall door
at the far end of the bathroom eases open.
INT. ASYLUM - SNAKE PIT - NIGHT (DREAM
SEQ.)
THERE IS NO
SOUND except for the HUMMING OF MACHINES.
Julia stumbles
through the snake pit. MENTAL PATIENTS stagger around her. Many of them are
dressed like homeless people. Staring into space. Bodies twitching and gnawing
on their fingers. Lying in their own urine.
Julia looks
skyward towards a SCREEN that doubles for a ceiling. Dark figures are standing
on the screen, looking down at them.
A pair of
ORDERLIES gently take Julia's arm and lead her out of the snake pit.
Julia looks at
the wall as she walks.
JULIA'S POV -
shadows move across the wall. Almost like ripples in water.
But the shadows gradually become the GROTESQUE
silhouettes of HUMAN BODY PARTS -- arms, legs, heads, feet -- hanging and
rocking gently from hooks
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY (DREAM SEQ.)
Blood trickles
down over the Superman tattoo.
INT. FAST FOOD
RESTAURANT - BATHROOM - NIGHT (DREAM SEQ.)
Clawed fingers
slide around the open stall door.
INT. ASYLUM -
CORRIDOR - NIGHT (DREAM SEQ.)
A HOMELESS
PERSON is having a seizure. Propped against the wall. Shaking horribly. His head
and body are entirely covered with braces that form a metal exoskeleton.
INT. DOCTOR'S
OFFICE - NIGHT (DREAM SEQ.)
A gynecology
exam. A woman's legs are held open by stirrups. A pair of hands protected by
rubber gloves cruelly insert a large alien-looking METAL OBJECT -- which is
nothing but sharp tentacles and angles -- between the legs.
INTERCUT - A
SCREAMING FACE
A woman
shrieking through rotting teeth and blood.
INT. ASYLUM -
SURGICAL ROOM - NIGHT (DREAM SEQ.)
Julia steps
into the surgical room.
The LITTLE GIRL
from Sam's party is resting on a gurney. Her small body is clamped down with
metal bands. Her blonde curls draped over the edge. Her eyes open and staring at
nothing.
SOMETHING ELSE LURCHES INTO the room. MOVING
IN THE SHADOWS. A SURGEON ENCLOSED IN METAL BRACES AND HOLDING a pair of
ALIEN-LOOKING shears in HIS HANDS.
THE SURGEON OPENS THE SHEARS OVER THE GIRL'S
FOREHEAD.
Julia tries to
scream. No sound comes out. The shears close.
Several drops
of BLOOD ... then a BLONDE CURL ... hit the tile floor.
The SOUND of the MACHINES is interrupted by
GLASS BREAKING.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOm - NIGHT
Julia lurches
awake.
Paul and Terry
are lying immobile on the floor. Hundreds of candles have been placed throughout
the room, bathing the cabin in a dull amber glow.
There is NO
SOUND.
Julia starts to
rise to her feet. Her fingers graze something sharp. She winces and snatches her
fingers away from ...
A BROKEN WINE
GLASS ...
Julia discovers
a small ribbon of blood trickling from her index finger. She sucks on it, and
notices --
SAM ...
Sitting behind
the couch. His eyes are intense as he erases something from his drawing pad.
Julia walks around him until she can see the sketch.
THE DRAWING IS
JULIA'S PORTRAIT.
Sam erases the
picture, working from the shoulders up.
There is still
NO SOUND.
Julia is
dumbfounded. She hears a slight noise coming from somewhere in the cabin. A
small HISSING sound. Soft and unobtrusive.
Julia looks
around. The sound seemed to come from behind her. But there's nothing in the
room. Her friends are still asleep. Sam is concentrating on his drawing.
More HISSING.
Unmistakable this time. A diminutive SCRAPING, almost like fingernails raking on
icy glass, slithering out from a darkened hallway.
She moves
towards the sound.
INT. CABIN -
HALLWAY - NIGHT
Julia creeps
into the hallway until she can barely see the rows of bedroom doors. All of them
are closed shut.
The SCRAPING
sound rises up again. Much closer. Behind one of the bedroom doors.
Beckoning.
Julia reaches
out for the doorknob.
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - NIGHT
The door opens.
Julia's stomach rises into her throat. Terror floods her face.
Resting on the bed is a BODY BAG. So smeared
with blood that the corpse inside isn't visible except for its massive
bulk.
Something SCRATCHES on the BODY BAG from
INSIDE.
Julia's body
goes rigid. She can't force herself to move.
The body bag is slowly unzipped from the
inside. Stretching down the length of the plastic until the bag is wide open.
The corpse inside is still hidden.
As if drawn by
some alien force, Julia moves to the bed. Her entire body is shaking.
She reaches out
and carefully peels back the plastic.
Resting within
the body bag is THE LITTLE GIRL. Eyes puffed shut. Hair slicked with blood. Her
skin is livid. Her face is ghostly white and smeared with crimson gore.
Julia is frozen
in place. Heart pounding. Terrified.
THE GIRL'S EYES
BLINK OPEN AS SHE SHRIEKS BLOODY MURDER.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - MORNING
Julia is
startled awake and groggily looks around the room. Paul and Terry are still in
the process of getting up.
PAUL
Look who's
up.
(smiles)
You sleep
well?
Julia STARES
back. She looks pretty freaked.
PAUL (cont'd)
Uh-oh.
TERRY
I didn't sleep
well either. I dreamt that all these cockroaches were eating my legs.
PAUL
You want to
trade? Right before I woke up, my head exploded and all these snakes came
out.
TERRY
Where's
Sam?
PAUL
Probably went
to bed.
Terry nods as
she rises to her feet.
TERRY
I need a hairbrush. And a
facial.
She stumbles
into the hallway. Paul turns to Julia.
PAUL
You had
nightmares too?
JULIA
Worst ones I've
had in a long time. I thought I was hallucinating.
Paul winces and
rubs his temples.
JULIA (cont'd)
What's
wrong?
PAUL
Headache. I'll
be fine.
Terry briskly
walks out the hallway. She looks alarmed.
TERRY
You guys.
Something's wrong.
INT. CABIN -
HALLWAY - DAY
The group walks
towards one of the bedroom doors.
TERRY
It's Sam. I
can't get the door open.
Paul tries the
doorknob. The door won't budge. Paul KNOCKS.
PAUL
Sam, open
up.
No answer. He
POUNDS harder.
PAUL (cont'd)
Sam?
TERRY
He won't
answer.
JULIA
Maybe he can't
answer.
Paul shoves
hard against the door. But it still won't give.
PAUL
What about the
bathroom door? It connects to your room.
TERRY
I tried it.
It's locked.
Paul turns the
doorknob and throws all his weight against the door, trying his best to bust it
down. No such luck.
PAUL
(voice
rising)
Sam?
He tries again
and again. WHOOMPH! .... WHOOMPH! ....
WHOOMPH! The
door inches open. Just a crack.
PAUL
(cont'd)
Help me out
with this.
Paul and Julia
push on the door, forcing it wider.
INT. CABIN -
GUEST BEDROOM - DAY
Paul struggles
through the aperture, slipping underneath a mattress that's been placed against
the door, and stumbles into the room.
The bedroom is a disaster area.
Clothes and
smashed glass cover the floor. Mirrors have been shattered. Most of the
furniture and portions of the bed have been piled in front of the door, creating
an almost impassible barricade. The window is wide open, the curtains billowing
in the breeze.
Julia and Terry
make their way into the room. Stupefied.
PAUL
Careful of the
glass. Don't step on it.
Total silence.
The group stares at the room. Taking it in. Trying to comprehend it.
JULIA
What
happened?
PAUL
(frozen)
You got me.
EXT. WOODS -
WALKING TRAIL - DAY
Paul and Terry
are walking along the trail. Searching.
TERRY
(calling)
Sam?
No reply. Her
words sound hollow in the empty forest as they keep moving, passing behind huge
pine trees that obscure them from view.
A soft breeze
rises up and HISSES through the trees.
INT. CABIN -
GUEST BEDROOM - DAY
Julia is
cleaning the mess in the room. She's just finished tossing a few shards of
broken glass into a garbage bag when she FLINCHES and draws her index finger
back.
The finger has
a scab on it. Exactly where she cut it in the dream. Dried blood marks the
wound.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Terry looks
beside herself. Paul and Julia are seated.
JULIA
He must have
gotten out through the window. That's the only thing I can figure.
TERRY
We have to call
the police.
JULIA
You looked
everywhere?
PAUL
Everywhere near
the cabin. But we can't cover every square inch of forest out there.
TERRY
He might be
sick. He might need help.
JULIA
I can't
understand why he'd do something like this.
PAUL
He was acting
nuts. Really nuts.
TERRY
(impatient)
I need a
phone.
PAUL
Wait. I've got
my cell.
Paul fishes the
cell phone out of his pocket. He hands it to her.
AND THE PHONE
RINGS.
Almost on cue.
Terry glances over at her friends, then clicks the receiver.
TERRY
Hello?
(beat)
Sam?
...
Julia and Paul
sit up in their seats.
TERRY (cont'd)
Where are you?
... No, where are you? ...
(beat)
How did you get
there? ...
Terry hurriedly
grabs a pen. She starts writing on a pad.
TERRY (cont'd)
Just a minute.
I'm writing it down. Market Street. The Ramada. I think I know where it is.
(beat)
Sam, what's
going on? What happened? ...
(then)
Sam? ... SAM?
...
She hangs up
the phone.
PAUL
Where is
he?
TERRY
San
Francisco.
JULIA
What?
TERRY
I don't know.
He wants me to meet him. My brother has an apartment up there. He's out of town,
but I have a spare key. I guess I could stay there.
Beat.
JULIA
You still want
to call the police?
Silence. Terry
doesn't respond to this.
Outside an open
window, the WIND HISSES through the trees.
EXT. BUS DEPOT
- NIGHT
An empty bus
station consisting of a single room with a CLERK sitting behind the front desk.
Julia and Paul are sitting on a pair of chairs, waiting patiently.
Terry is using
a phone booth outside. She hangs up and walks into the depot.
JULIA
Did you get his
parents?
TERRY
It was the
wrong number.
JULIA
Didn't Sam give
you that number?
TERRY
Maybe I wrote
it down wrong.
Terry winces a
bit. She massages her legs.
PAUL
Are you
okay?
TERRY
My legs are
killing me.
JULIA
You sure you
don't want us to drive you?
TERRY
Nah. You have
to stick around for the movers. I'll be fine.
The bus arrives
in front of the depot.
TERRY (cont'd)
There's my
ride.
Terry grabs her
suitcase. Julia hands her a slip of paper.
JULIA
This is Paul's
cell number. You call us. Let us know what happens.
TERRY
I just need to
talk to him. Don't call the police or anything until I've had a chance to do
that.
JULIA
Okay.
TERRY
Thanks.
Terry hugs
Julia. Paul gives her a quick kiss on the cheek.
PAUL
Remember. Call
us.
TERRY
I will.
Carrying her
suitcase, Terry backs toward the door, smiling sadly at Julia and Paul as she
opens it.
TERRY (cont'd)
It'll be okay.
Everything's okay.
Her voice
resonates with desperate hope rather than confidence. She leaves the depot.
Paul places his
arms around Julia as they watch the bus leave the station, trailing smoke.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Julia is
cleaning up. She kneels down and picks up some of the melted candles and beer
bottles.
Paul walks into
room holding a broken picture frame.
PAUL
I talked to the
movers.
JULIA
Why didn't they
show up?
PAUL
The company has
no record of the order.
Beat.
JULIA
What?
PAUL
I know. It's
crazy.
JULIA
Are they coming
now?
PAUL
It'll take them
a while to work us into the schedule -- get a van out here to pick up
everything.
JULIA
How long?
PAUL
Three days.
JULIA
(exhausted)
Shit.
Paul holds out
the mangled frame.
PAUL
I also found
this in the guest bedroom. Sam knocked one of the packing boxes over. This was
inside.
Julia takes a
look at the frame. It's the same picture from her room of herself with her
mother. The broken glass has torn the photograph.
PAUL (cont'd)
I wasn't sure
if you wanted to keep it.
JULIA
No. I've got
one.
Beat.
JULIA (cont'd)
You know this
is the only picture I have of my mother?
(beat)
She was always
taking pictures of us, but we never got any of her.
(emotional)
If I didn't
have this, I couldn't prove that I had a mother.
PAUL
That's not
true.
Another
beat.
JULIA
I'm so worried
about Sam.
Julia drowns in
her thoughts. Paul touches her cheek.
PAUL
Let's get outta
here.
JULIA
(smiles)
Good idea.
PAUL
I'll get my
keys.
Paul walks out.
Julia places the frame on the coffee table.
She notices
something on the floor. Julia squints. It's a small object resting in the corner
... almost hidden from view. Julia reaches into the shadows and picks up ...
ANOTHER PIECE OF METAL with STRANGE markings.
EXACTLY LIKE THE ONE FROM THE CLOSET.
Julia stares at
the object in her palm. Surprised.
JULIA
(to
herself)
Where are these
coming from?
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- PARK - DAY
A warm summer
afternoon. The entire town has congragated in a park with a breathtaking view of
the ocean. MUSIC and NOISE. A huge banner draped over the street reads ...
SANTA MIRA
CELEBRATES THE 45TH ANNUAL FOUNDER'S DAY FESTIVAL
Julia navigates
her way past the booths and thrill rides that have been erected on the lawn. She
watches some passersby.
JULIA'S POV ...
as A MOTHER talks on a cell phone while her six year-old DAUGHTER tugs at her
sleeve. Trying to get her attention. The mother keeps pushing the child away as
she talks.
Julia observes
this scene until she hears ...
WOMAN'S VOICE
(O.S.)
I'm your
mother.
Julia steps out
of the crowd. Searches for the voice.
A HOMELESS
WOMAN is shadowing a COLLEGE-AGE GIRL walking with her boyfriend. They're trying
to ignore her.
HOMELESS
WOMAN
I'm your mother
... I'm your mother ... I'm your mother ...
The couple
walks faster. The Homeless Woman is left behind.
HOMELESS
WOMAN (cont'd)
(futile)
I'm your mother
...
Julia stares
helplessly.
EXT. PARK -
CAROUSEL - DAY
Spinning
merrily in the center of the park. Bright lights. Loud CALLIOPE MUSIC. Young
kids and teenagers occupy the horses and benches.
Julia slowly
walks towards the carousel, snapping pictures of the children and whirling
lights. Behind her, the sound of a SCREAMING CHILD rises above the music and
laughter. She turns and finds a two year old BABY sitting on her father's
shoulders, crying and pointing at --
THE YOUNG BLOND
BOY ...
Wearing his
blue Superman shirt. He's sitting on a swing set by himself. Sad and alone.
He makes eye
contact with Julia. Waves timidly. She smiles at him and waves back.
CLOSE ON: THE
CAROUSEL
Gears turning.
The poles spearing the horses rising and falling into the floor. The platform
rotating near the grass.
The CALLIOPE
MUSIC becomes the HUMMING of MACHINES.
EXT. SANTA MIRA
- PARK - NIGHT
Julia is
wandering through a maze of shooting galleries. She searches through the crowds
of teenagers and children at the booths. Finally, she locates ...
PAUL ...
Approaching her
with a large Teddy Bear under his arm.
JULIA
Where did you
go?
PAUL
Basketball
toss. I won this for you.
Julia smiles at
the bear.
JULIA
You sure you
want to give him up?
PAUL
(nice
smile)
I think he'd
crowd my Barbie collection.
Julia kisses
him. He kisses her back and winces in pain.
JULIA
You okay?
PAUL
Head still
hurts.
JULIA
Need some
aspirin?
PAUL
Already took
some. I'll be okay.
Paul notices
that they've wandered into a row of PSYCHIC and TAROT CARD BOOTHS.
PAUL (cont'd)
Hey, look. Want
to get your palm read?
JULIA
As long as
you're feeling up to it.
PAUL
I am. Come
on.
Julia spots
another booth with a sign overhead: "THE PAST THROUGH POSSESSIONS."
JULIA
Just a minute.
You go to the palm reader. I want to check out this one.
PAUL
"The past
through possessions?"
(unimpressed)
Scam city.
JULIA
And palm
reading isn't?
She's got him
there.
PAUL
All right. I'll
meet you over there.
JULIA
Thanks.
She kisses him
quickly. They split up.
EXT. PALM
READER'S BOOTH - NIGHT
Paul approaches
the booth.
An
African-American woman in her mid-forties, TESS, sits behind the counter. Loose
and upbeat. Wearing more colors in her clothing than even a rainbow could
provide.
PAUL
Can you read my
palm?
She grins.
TESS
You got five
bucks?
EXT. PSYCHIC
BOOTH - NIGHT
Julia walks to
the front counter of the booth.
A pair of women
are sitting behind the counter, but the one who sticks out is ROSEMARY, sixty,
psychic and clairvoyant. She wears a purple kaftan which barely hides her
weakness for ice cream and cookies.
ROSEMARY
Can we help
you, honey?
JULIA
You can tell me
things just by holding something of mine. Right?
ROSEMARY
Absolutely. I
have a perfect track record. I found two missing children in the spring of '74,
and helped the state police catch a murderer in '81.
JULIA
Wow. That's
amazing.
ROSEMARY
(sourly)
My
grandchildren aren't quite as impressed.
(a
little brighter)
What did you
want me to look at?
Julia reaches
into her pocket and gently places something on the counter in front of
Rosemary.
THE METAL
OBJECTS FROM THE CLOSET AND THE LIVING ROOM.
EXT. PALM
READER'S BOOTH - NIGHT
Tess takes
Paul's hand.
TESS
So what do you
want to know?
PAUL
It's kinda
stupid. But I sorta wanted to know about my Dad. If I should see him.
TESS
(knowingly)
You and your
father don't get along.
PAUL
No.
TESS
Something
happened?
PAUL
My parents got
divorced when I was sixteen. I got into a fight with him. Said some stuff.
He bows his
head a little. A tough subject for him.
TESS
Let's take a
look ...
Tess cocks her
head a little to the side. She looks confused.
TESS (cont'd)
(soft)
I'll be
damned.
PAUL
What's
wrong?
TESS
Well kid, you
might be the first person to make me hang up my fortune telling degree. Usually
the palm makes sense, and this one doesn't.
PAUL
How do you
mean?
TESS
According to
this, you don't exist.
OFF Paul, his
face turning white.
EXT. PSYCHIC
BOOTH - NIGHT
Rosemary
handles one of the metal objects, turning it over in her palm. Julia watches her
as she goes through this ritual.
ROSEMARY
This is
interesting.
JULIA
Let me guess.
They came from a vacuum cleaner, right?
Beat.
ROSEMARY
Machines.
JULIA
Excuse me?
ROSEMARY
This came from
a machine. But not a household appliance.
JULIA
Where did it
come from?
Rosemary turns
the object over in her palm. Over and over.
ROSEMARY
Something that
was alive.
Julia leans
forward in her seat.
JULIA
But you just
said it came from a machine.
ROSEMARY
I know.
JULIA
So how can a
machine be alive?
ROSEMARY
I don't make
the news. I just report it.
JULIA
I found the
larger one inside of a closet. Do you know how it got there?
Rosemary
continues meditating. Turning the object over between her fingers. Staring at
it.
Gradually, she
falls into a trance. Her breathing slows.
ROSEMARY
We shed our
parts.
JULIA
What?
ROSEMARY
And our
skin.
JULIA
I'm sorry. What
are you talking about?
Rosemary is
oblivious to anything around her.
ROSEMARY
But they need
to be replaced. Some of the parts we can find.
(beat)
Others need to
be harvested.
The other
PSYCHIC seated next to Rosemary throws her a curious glance as she counts up
some money.
ROSEMARY (cont'd)
We'll wait on
the side of the road. Until one of the machines come.
(beat)
One of us will
be sacrificed. That will stop the machine. Then we can take whatever skins are
inside.
(softer)
We can use
their parts.
Paul walks
up.
PAUL
Julia?
She motions for
him to be quiet.
ROSEMARY
We stopped the
machine. But there are more of the skins than we thought ...
PAUL
Julia. Let's
take off.
JULIA
Hold on.
ROSEMARY
We must wait.
More of us are needed to capture them.
PAUL
What's she
talking about?
JULIA
Wait just a
minute. Please.
Beat.
The objects
continue turning in her hand ... and turning ... and turning ... and turning
...
ROSEMARY
There are more
of us now. We've surrounded them. But they're leaving too quickly.
PAUL
Julia?
... and turning ...
ROSEMARY
We'll follow
them. We'll watch them.
(beat)
We'll take them
as the need for parts becomes necessary ...
PAUL
(louder)
Julia?
The wind gently
HISSES through the booth's tent.
ROSEMARY
Maybe we'll
only take one ...
(beat)
Maybe we'll
take another ... and another ... and another ... and another ...
A sudden gust
of wind rises through the tent as ...
THE POWER FAILS
THROUGHOUT THE PARK. LIGHTS START GOING OUT IN SECTIONS UNTIL THE ENTIRE FAIR IS
PITCH BLACK.
The sound of
mumbling and confusion seethes from the crowd. Julia rises out of her chair.
Paul takes her into her arms as CHILDREN can be heard CRYING throughout the
park.
Above them, the
wind HISSES through the trees.
EXT. CABIN -
DRIVEWAY - NIGHT
Julia sits on
the porch. Paul is stretched out on the grass looking up at the stars.
PAUL
So the power
went out. That doesn't mean anything.
JULIA
Did you hear
what she said?
PAUL
No.
JULIA
She was talking
about the accident. The night you hit that thing on the road. She knew about
that.
PAUL
Julia, a
psychic tells you some random shit and then lets YOU make sense out of it.
JULIA
She said it was
waiting for us.
PAUL
Oh sure. An
animal was waiting for us to come along and run it down. What was the
explanation? Rotten home life? Was it taking Prozac?
JULIA
It wanted to
stop the car.
PAUL
Why?
JULIA
Something about
needing parts.
PAUL
If it needed
parts, it shouldn't have committed suicide.
JULIA
She said there
were more of them.
PAUL
Who cares what
she said? It doesn't mean anything.
JULIA
But it's not
just that.
Julia's voice
becomes soft. As if she were telling a secret.
JULIA (cont'd)
I've also had
this feeling. Ever since Sam disappeared. I can't shake it.
PAUL
What is it?
JULIA
I feel like
something's missing.
PAUL
Something?
JULIA
I don't know.
It's on the tip of my tongue. I just feel like ever since we woke up that
morning, something's not right. Like ... there's someone who should be here
...
PAUL
Right. Sam.
JULIA
It's not
Sam.
(then)
Did that palm
reader say anything strange to you. Anything at all?
Paul hesitates.
He looks back at the night sky.
PAUL
No.
Beat.
JULIA
Can I use your
phone?
INT. LEVIN
HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
A traditional
home. The phone rings and Connor comes charging down the stairs. He answers
it.
CONNOR
Hello?
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - NIGHT - INTERCUT
Julia is
sitting on the couch.
JULIA
Connor. It's
Julia.
CONNOR
Oh. I thought
you were someone else.
JULIA
Nice to hear
your voice too.
CONNOR
You having
fun?
JULIA
(understated)
Not
exactly.
CONNOR
I got my PSAT's
back. 720 verbal. 690 math. You think that's good enough to get into
Berkeley?
JULIA
You'll get in.
Listen, is Dad there?
CONNOR
No.
JULIA
Well could you
leave him a message?
CONNOR
Uh-huh.
JULIA
Tell him that
the movers didn't come, so I'll be here a few more days. Tell him that I have
some stuff of Mom's that he might want.
CONNOR
Okay.
JULIA
Don't
forget.
CONNOR
Jesus. Show a
little faith. When have I ever forgotten something?
INT. DARKROOM -
DAY
A piece of
developing paper is slipped into the tray basin.
Julia gently
rocks the basin back and forth. A picture starts to manifest on the paper.
INT. CABIN -
BATHROOM - DAY
Paul splashes
his face with water. He looks worse than he did the night before. Weaker.
He grabs some
aspirin from the medicine cabinet.
INT. DARKROOM -
DAY
Julia leans
forward to get a better view of the developing picture. An image is slowly
forming -- carousel horses, the vague outlines of poles and children.
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - DAY
Paul is
shirtless and doing one-armed push-ups. His muscles churn. His body rises and
falls like a piston.
INT. DARKROOM -
DAY
The picture has
come into view. The carousel. The children laughing as they ride the horses.
And something
else ...
An
irregularity. A dark form in the center of the carousel.
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - DAY
CLOSER ON
Paul's arm as he does push-ups, sweat beading on his biceps, muscles
rippling.
The SOUND of
MACHINES pulsates and segues into ...
INT. DARKROOM -
DAY
Julia takes the
picture out of the developing basin.
WE MOVE INTO THE PHOTO - There's a dark SHAPE
standing in the middle of the carousel. Blurred and indistinct. ALMOST LIKE A
SILHOUETTE OR A SHADOW.
EXCEPT THAT it's waving at the
camera.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Paul is sitting
on the couch, wearing a UCLA cross country tank top and tying his shoes. Julia
enters from the basement. She's carrying a stack of developed pictures.
JULIA
Paul, you have
to see this. The picture came out, but there's something really strange in the
middle of it. Just like the other one of the shed.
He looks at the
picture.
PAUL
Looks like
someone on the carousel.
JULIA
But there's no
features. It's like a shadow.
PAUL
So there wasn't
enough light.
Paul rubs his
forehead. Julia is genuinely concerned.
JULIA
What's the
matter?
PAUL
My head feels
worse.
JULIA
Maybe you
should lie down.
PAUL
I have to go
running.
JULIA
No you
don't.
PAUL
Of course I do.
Your body's like a machine. It needs upkeep.
JULIA
Not when you're
physically ill.
PAUL
I'll be
okay.
JULIA
Paul ...
PAUL
I'll be
okay.
(about
the picture)
Is that it?
JULIA
Not
exactly.
(beat)
When I saw this
picture, I decided to look at the other one. Just for comparison's sake.
PAUL
So?
Julia takes out
another photograph.
JULIA
I pulled this
one by mistake. The picture of that little girl from the party.
She hands him
the picture.
JULIA (cont'd)
Look.
Paul's face
collapses into slack disbelief.
THE LITTLE GIRL HAS DISAPPEARED from the
photo. Vanished.
Paul turns to
Julia as she looks into his eyes with a mixture of fear and apprehension.
JULIA (cont'd)
What's going
on?
This time, he
doesn't have an answer.
EXT. WOODS -
WALKING TRAIL - DAY
Murky and
still. A few shafts of sunlight permeate the gloom.
Paul is jogging
along the trail, keeping a steady pace, the sounds of the forest all around
him.
EXT. CREEK
BRIDGE - DAY
The trail
snakes towards a wooden bridge that spans over a trickling creek. Paul runs
across, the soles of his sneakers SLAPPING on creaking wood.
He moves deeper
into the woods.
EXT. WOODS -
TRAIL - DAY
A lonely part
of the woods where almost all the daylight is blocked out by the trees.
Paul jogs along
the trail when he slows to a halt, sweaty and out of breath. His skin is pale.
His limbs are shivering. Paul cradles his head, shutting his eyes, suffering
from obvious pain.
PAUL
(very
soft)
Oh God ....
make it stop ...
He starts
walking forward again. Very slowly.
A slight
TINKLING sound as he kicks something at his feet. His eyes blink open as he
looks down ...
There are several pieces of metal littering
the trail. Almost like nuts and bolts, but alien in their design.
Paul reaches
down and picks one of the bolts up. Studies it. He keeps walking, following more
pieces of metal that lead off the footpath.
EXT. FOREST -
DAY
A darker spot
enclosed by pine trees. A few birds are singing overhead.
Paul enters the
forest, pushing back branches, following the trail of discarded metal until he
freezes ... his eyes staring directly ahead at ...
CLUMPS OF BLACK
SKIN ...
Hanging from
branches. Scattered on the ground. Like the skin of a snake which has been
shed.
Paul is
completely unsettled. He kneels down, picking up a flap of skin from the ground,
peeling it away from a steel ROD dripping with oozing slime. Holds it up. It's
still black in color but almost transparent in the murky light.
The wind HISSES
through the trees, mussing Paul's hair.
Paul drops the
piece of skin on the ground.
The birds
abruptly stop singing in unison. The WIND CEASES.
Paul looks
around the forest. The sudden quiet has got him spooked. His arms and legs
stiffen. Paul can't even bring himself to move or breathe ...
UNTIL SOMETHING
DROPS ON HIS SHOULDER ...
Paul freaks and
whirls around, grabbing his shoulder to find
A PIECE OF SKIN
...
Clinging to
him. He rips it off and sprints for the footpath.
EXT. WOODS -
FOOTPATH - DAY
Paul sprints
out of the forest, running with blinding speed and adrenaline. He doesn't look
back.
Behind him, the
wind HISSES through the trees again.
INT. CABIN -
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Julia comes up
from the basement. She hears COUGHING coming from the bathroom.
INT. BATHROOM -
NIGHT
Julia enters
the bathroom. Paul is retching and coughing into the toilet. Hair plastered to
his forehead. Pale as death. Shaking badly.
JULIA
Paul? What's
wrong?
PAUL
(feeble)
Sick.
She goes to
him. Rubs his shoulders as he COUGHS again.
JULIA
Oh baby ...
Julia brushes
the hair from his forehead. She freezes.
Just above his
temple is a SCAB. No bigger than the head of an eraser. Identical to the one on
Julia's finger.
JULIA (cont'd)
Paul? Where did
this come from?
PAUL
What?
JULIA
This scab.
Julia runs her
finger over the scab. Paul immediately reels from her touch, pain shooting
through his head, furious.
PAUL
Jesus! Fuck!
Julia is
shocked by the severity of his reaction.
JULIA
I'm sorry.
Paul holds his
head tight. Almost near tears. Fighting pain.
PAUL
Just don't
touch it.
JULIA
How long has it
been there?
PAUL
Ever since my
head started to hurt.
(then)
I think I'm
hallucinating.
JULIA
What did you
see?
PAUL
Skin ... like
it was shed ... and all of these metal pieces ...
Julia is
terribly concerned now. His description frightens her, but she maintains a
visage of calm.
JULIA
Do you want to
see a doctor? I know there's one in Santa Mira.
PAUL
I can see a
doctor in Los Angeles.
(then)
Look, I want to
get out of here, okay? Let's go home.
Beat.
JULIA
Okay.
She squeezes
his shoulder and walks into --
INT. CABIN -
BEDROOM - DAY
Julia pulls out
their duffle bags and suitcases.
Paul's cell
phone RINGS on the table. Julia snatches up the phone and answers.
JULIA
Hello? ... Yes?
...
(then)
Wait a minute
... slow down, I can't understand what you're saying ...
Complete
astonishment storms Julia's face. Paul wanders in.
PAUL
Who is it?
JULIA
It's Terry.
Something went wrong.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - ESTABLISHING - DAY
Gloomy and
overcast. Storm clouds are brewing.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - DAY
The Range Rover
pulls down a crowded street.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - DAY
Julia is
sitting behind the wheel. Navigating traffic.
Paul sits on
the passenger side, leaning against the window, his face pressed against the
glass. Somber and weak.
THROUGH THE
WINDSHIELD
The twisted
remains of a car accident has brought everything to a near standstill. Police
are everywhere. An ambulance is parked along the curb, lights flashing.
Julia leans
forward to get a better look.
JULIA'S POV
A TEEN ACCIDENT
VICTIM presses a white towel against his thigh. Blood gushes from it. A huge
metal ROD sticks out of his leg.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - DAY
The Range Rover
moves past the shredded cars involved in the accident. Twisted metal covers the
street.
EXT. PACIFIC
HEIGHTS - LATE AFTERNOON
Summer rain is
falling. THUNDER ROLLS overhead.
The Rover pulls
up to the sidewalk, directly in front of an extremely opulent upper-class
house.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - LATE AFTERNOON
Julia turns to
Paul who sits silently in the passenger seat. He doesn't move.
JULIA
Sure you don't
want to come with me?
PAUL
I'm too sick. I
need to stay someplace.
JULIA
I'm worried
about leaving you here.
PAUL
(shrugs)
It's not like
he'll disown me.
JULIA
I know.
PAUL
And I really
need him right now.
More THUNDER.
Julia kisses his cheek.
JULIA
I'm taking the
cell phone. You call me.
PAUL
Promise.
JULIA
See a
doctor.
PAUL
I will.
Paul opens the
passenger door and steps out into the rain. Julia watches him approach the
house. Then, she pulls away from the curb.
INT. PACIFIC
HEIGHTS RESIDENCE - FOYER - LATE AFTERNOON
A nice house.
Large and affluent.
The DOORBELL
CHIMES.
A few moments
pass before a sullen FIGURE arrives at the front door and pulls it open,
revealing ...
PAUL
standing on the
front porch. His wet hair plastered to his forehead, rain streaming off his
cheeks, his handsome face turned pallid and colorless.
He manages a
sheepish smile.
PAUL
Dad.
Standing at the
door is a man in his mid-fifties, MR. LOOMIS. A severe presence with a soured
and weathered face. He stares at Paul without any sign of emotion.
Paul notices
the slight. He presses onward. A bit haltingly. Still hopeful and trying to
connect.
PAUL (cont'd)
I was hoping we
could talk ...
(beat)
I know we
haven't done much of that recently, but still ...
(beat)
I was
hoping.
Beat.
PAUL (cont'd)
I'm in a lot of
trouble. I'm getting sick ... and I was hoping ...
(beat)
I was hoping
you could help.
Paul is having
difficulty speaking. He's almost reduced to tears as he stands in the cold,
stinging rain.
PAUL (cont'd)
I want to come
home. Please Dad.
(desperate)
Please let me
come home.
A moment of
silence.
PAUL (cont'd)
Please?
His father
stands steely eyed. His voice is icy and distant.
MR. LOOMIS
I don't know
you.
Paul is
devastated. He can barely utter a sound.
PAUL
I'm your
son.
Agonizing
beat.
MR. LOOMIS
I don't have a
son.
(then)
I don't know
you.
He slowly
closes the door. Paul begins weeping openly.
PAUL
Dad ...
The door is
shut in his face. Nothing can be heard except for the rain falling outside.
EXT. SAN FRANCISCO - MARKET - LATE
AFTERNOON
Julia is standing near the entrance. Waiting
patiently.
A figure across the street catches Julia's
attention -- a HOMELESS MAN stumbling down the sidewalk, talking to himself,
shaking a rattle.
VOICE
(O.S.)
Julia?
Julia turns
around, searching, not immediately recognizing the figure that briskly
approaches her --
It's Terry. But
her once perfect appearance has become harsh and drawn. Her blonde hair has been
colored dark brown. There are sagging circles under her eyes. Her skin is
colorless. She moves quickly. Nervously.
Julia is
shocked.
JULIA
Terry?
Terry's hands
tremble.
TERRY
I'm glad you
came. You don't have any idea how scared I've been.
JULIA
Why did you
change your hair?
Terry is about
to answer when a BABY starts crying in the market. Fear takes control of her
face.
TERRY
We can't stay
here.
JULIA
Why?
TERRY
Where are you
parked?
JULIA
On the
street.
TERRY
Good. If we
keep moving, they might have trouble tracking us.
Terry takes
Julia's arm and leads her out of the market.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - CONTINUOUS
Terry is moving
at a swift pace. She keeps looking back over her shoulder as Julia tries to keep
up. Rain drenches them.
JULIA
What the hell
is going on? Where's Sam?
TERRY
He's dead.
This almost
sends Julia reeling. Her mouth falls open.
JULIA
What?
TERRY
There's three
things you should remember. Three things.
JULIA
What happened
to Sam?
TERRY
First, whenever
you see a baby or a kid crying, keep moving. Children can sense them. That's
your warning.
JULIA
Warning against
who?
TERRY
Second, they
can control anything electrical or mechanical. Lamps. Cars. Phones.
JULIA
Terry, you're
not making any sense.
TERRY
Third -- they
can change things. They can make you disappear.
JULIA
Tell me what
happened to Sam.
TERRY
I am telling
you.
(terrified)
They took him.
They made him disappear.
Julia stops
walking. Speechless.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - COFFEE HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON
A young COLLEGE
STUDENT is typing on his powerbook, oblivious to the TRANSIENT sitting on the
sidewalk, head buried in his knees, a sign at his feet reading "HELP ME."
CLOSE ON THE
POWERBOOK. A soft whirring noise
seeping from the computer as the student types.
The WHIRRING
becomes the HUMMING OF MACHINES.
The Range Rover
appears on the street and moves past.
TERRY
(V.O.)
They take away
your identity. People stop remembering you. Your place in society vanishes.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - SAN FRANCISCO - MOVING
Julia is behind
the wheel. Terry is devouring a cigarette.
TERRY
That's how they
get you. By making people not even care about you anymore.
JULIA
Did you try
Sam's parents? Did you get the right number this time?
TERRY
The number I
called at the bus station was his parents.
(cryptic)
We didn't hit a
dog on the road.
JULIA
But I saw
it.
TERRY
They switched
bodies.
JULIA
Who are "they?"
A cult? Killers?
Terry starts
laughing to herself. Tears welling in her eyes. Hopeless. Terrified.
TERRY
You have no
idea. No idea what you're dealing with.
(then)
They don't even
belong here. They're like ... like machines. That's what Sam said. Like
machines with all this skin and moving parts.
JULIA
They're
machines?
TERRY
Monsters.
They're monsters, Julia.
Julia stops at
a light.
A YOUNG GUY
crosses the street in front of them. He's just a yuppie with a cell phone. But
Terry stiffens in her seat, watching him suspiciously.
Then, almost as
an aside, he winks at her.
TERRY (cont'd)
Drive.
JULIA
I can't.
There's a red.
TERRY
Then make a
right. Just keep driving.
Julia is
growing frightened by Terry's paranoia.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - LATE AFTERNOON
The Rover makes
a right turn and cruises down another block.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - LATE AFTERNOON
Terry keeps her
eyes riveted on the PEOPLE on the sidewalk. She's practically in tears.
TERRY
Remember when
we hit that thing with the car?
(hushed)
It wasn't an
accident. It was a set-up. They planned it all along.
JULIA
How do you know
this?
TERRY
Sam told me. He
figured everything out.
JULIA
Why are they
coming after us? What do they want with us?
TERRY
They have flesh
and metal parts in their bodies. Sometimes they shed what they don't need. But
other parts keep getting worn out or lost. So they take people constantly to get
new parts.
JULIA
(soft)
That's not
possible.
TERRY
They wear the
skin. That's why you don't notice them. Half of the time they're wearing
people's skin. Or they're hiding in dark places. Alleys. Closets.
Julia is
horrified.
JULIA
Terry ...
please stop.
TERRY
They take other
parts too. Whatever they need. They're scavengers. No sense of compassion. No
remorse.
JULIA
I don't believe
this.
TERRY
That's why they
came after us. They got Joey first. At the cabin.
Julia is
dumbfounded.
JULIA
Joey?
TERRY
That's what Sam
saw. That's why he left. He woke up and got a look at them -- at what they were
doing to Joey ...
JULIA
Terry ...
TERRY
Stripping him
... taking his skin off ...
Julia pulls
over to the curb and stops.
JULIA
Who is Joey?
What are you talking about?
TERRY
(amazed)
You don't
remember?
JULIA
No.
TERRY
There were five
of us. He came up in his own car. He was Paul's best friend -- they always wore
the same thing for Christ sakes.
JULIA
There were only
four of us. You. Me. Paul. Sam.
Terry is
shaking now. Complete fright.
TERRY
They got to
you. They got to you.
JULIA
Nobody got to
me.
Terry starts
collecting her things.
TERRY
Look, could you
drop me off at my brother's apartment? I need to pick up some things before I go
to the airport.
JULIA
Where are you
going?
TERRY
To see my
parents.
JULIA
You can't just
leave.
Terry starts
weeping. Grabbing her legs and squeezing them.
TERRY
They put things
in my legs so they can track me. It hurts.
JULIA
(very
concerned)
Terry? What can
I do to help you?
Terry takes her
hand. Her eyes pleading.
TERRY
Remember me.
Please remember me.
From the street
outside the car, the sound of a TODDLER CRYING can be heard. Terry's head snaps
around. She stares out the windshield at the screaming child.
TERRY (cont'd)
They found me
again.
Before Julia
can react, Terry bolts from the car.
JULIA
Terry!
Julia
pursues.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - LATE AFTERNOON
Julia pushes
and shoves her way along the sidewalk. Terry is running like a madwoman. Pure
unabated terror.
Terry rushes
down into a subway entrance. Julia follows.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - LATE AFTERNOON
People are
crowded on the platform, waiting as a BART train rushes into the station.
The doors open.
Passengers move off the train. Others get on.
Julia rushes
down the stairs and pushes past the arriving commuters. There's no sign of
Terry. Julia keeps searching. Looks right. Then left. Finally, she spots Terry
boarding the BART train.
JULIA
Terry!
Wait!
Julia rushes
forward, squirming through the crowd, until she reaches the doors just as they
SLAM CLOSED. She looks through the windows, trying to find Terry amongst the
crowd inside.
The train
starts to move.
Standing at one
of the train's passenger windows, his face and palms pressed against the glass,
is --
THE BLOND BOY
IN THE SUPERMAN SHIRT.
Staring
directly at her. Dark circles around his eyes.
He smiles at
Julia.
His teeth are made of metal.
Julia stands
thunderstruck. The BOY in the window moves past.
The train
shoots into the awaiting tunnel. Julia is left standing frozen and immobile on
the platform.
Near the subway
entrance, a HOMELESS MAN with HOOKS FOR HANDS is convulsing as he sits against
the wall. Eyes wide open. Shaking horribly and staring at nothing.
INT. APARTMENT
BUILDING - UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - NIGHT
Quiet and dimly
lit. Several of the lights are burnt out, leaving the hallway drowning in
shadows.
The elevator
doors open. Terry exits and moves quickly down the hallway. Her face is
terrified. Sick.
She arrives at
an apartment. Terry fumbles with her keys.
A soft THUMPING in the hallway. Deep and
hollow. Terry spins around, the keys JINGLING in her hand.
Nothing there.
The hall appears to be empty and dark. One of the lights overhead is flickering
and buzzing softly, providing
scant illumination.
She takes a
step back ...
A soft TINKLING
sound at her feet. Terry looks down to find a few pieces of METAL littering the
floor. Nuts and bolts. Rods. Alien in design.
Terry's
paranoia rises to a fever pitch. She turns the key in the lock. Opens the front
door.
INT. APARTMENT
- LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Terry shuts the door. Locks it. Switches on the
lights. Drops her KEYS and CELL PHONE on a coffee table.
She moves briskly into --
INT. APARTMENT
- BEDROOM - NIGHT
An open
suitcase on the bed. Terry snatches up a PLANE TICKET and jams the ticket folder
into her purse. Slams the suitcase closed.
INT. APARTMENT
- LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Terry leaves
the bedroom, carrying the suitcase, and walks straight towards the front door.
She collects her keys and her cell phone from the table.
The lights in the apartment simultaneously go
out.
Terry is caught
entirely off guard. She spins around to face the living room. Nobody's there.
Nothing.
SOMETHING BANGS
AT THE FRONT DOOR. A STEADY POUNDING. THE BANGING GOES ON FOR A FEW SECONDS AND
THEN STOPS DEAD.
Terry's
breathing quickens. She puts the suitcase down.
A crack of
THUNDER reverberates outside.
Moving with the
cautious steps of a small child, she walks towards the front door. Foot by foot.
The only sound is her FRIGHTENED BREATHING. She arrives at the peephole and
looks out into the empty hall.
SOMETHING
STARES BACK AT HER THROUGH THE PEEPHOLE.
Moving right in
front of the door. One of its yellow eyes piercing through ... surrounded by
midnight skin pierced with metal bolts and rods.
TERRY SCREAMS
HER LUNGS OUT.
The DOOR
RATTLES like it's going to break off its hinges. Something SLAMS REPEATEDLY
against the wood.
Terry tears
through the apartment, feet POUNDING. She rushes into the bedroom.
The front door
in the living room BREAKS OPEN.
INT. APARTMENT
- BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
Terry SLAMS the
bedroom door and locks it. Backs away towards the bed, when ...
A HAND REACHES
OUT FROM UNDER IT ...
Grabbing hold
of her ankle. Fused together from rotting flesh, human parts, and metal pieces.
Terry pitches forward, SCREAMING, falling to her hands and knees.
The hand starts
dragging her under the bed.
Terry kicks and
claws on the floor. Somehow manages to free herself from the hand's grip. She
goes for the window and pulls it open. Steps outside.
The entire bed
is OVERTURNED and tossed aside.
EXT. APARTMENT
BUILDING - FIRE ESCAPE - NIGHT
Terry is
immediately drenched by the storm. The door within her bedroom can be heard
CRASHING OPEN, followed by a ROARING unlike anything on this earth.
Terry rushes
down the fire escape, FEET BANGING on the metal steps. But she stops dead in her
tracks when she notices --
SEVERAL FIGURES
...
Standing in the
alley far below. Looking up at her. Waiting.
A sound rises
up behind her. THE SOUND OF FOOTSTEPS BANGING DOWN THE FIRE ESCAPE IN
PURSUIT.
TERRY
(horrified)
Oh God ...
Terry
desperately goes to a window. She pulls it open, stepping inside, THE BANGING
FOOTSTEPS RIGHT BEHIND HER.
INT. APARTMENT
BUILDING - HALLWAY - NIGHT
The apartment
floor is being renovated. Plastic tarps cover the doors and windows. Terry races
through the hallway, SCREAMING WILDLY as she POUNDS on the doors.
TERRY
HELP ME! PLEASE
HELP!!!
Terry rockets
around the corner. She presses the elevator door button frantically.
The sound of
CROAKING and HISSING fills the hallway.
The elevator
doors slide open.
Terry lunges
into the elevator, hits for the lobby, then starts BEATING FRENZIEDLY on the
door close button.
Several shadows
appear in the hallway. Getting closer.
Terry SCREAMS
WILDLY and keeps pounding the button.
The bizarre
HISSING becomes a FRIGHTFUL ROAR just as ...
The elevator
doors pull shut. Closing on the unseen things in the hallway.
INT. ELEVATOR -
NIGHT
The car starts going down. Floor lights blink above
the door.
8 ... 7 ... 6 ...
Terry punches out 9-1-1 on the cell phone's keypad. Nothing comes
through the receiver. Only static.
TERRY
Come on ...
come on ...
She dials
again.
4 ... 3 ... 2
...
More static
over the cell phone. Terry has started crying in anguish when the elevator comes
to an abrupt halt.
The doors stay
closed.
Terry looks
above the elevator doors. The floor light reads --
"B"
(Basement)
Terry starts
pressing for the lobby. The elevator won't move. She presses the "door open"
button, the alarm button, anything at all. Nothing responds.
TERRY (cont'd)
HELP! SOMEBODY!
HELP ME!!!
Nothing. Futile
silence. She's about to try dialing on the cell phone again, when ...
WHUMP. A heavy
thudding sound above the elevator car roof. The light overhead flickers like a
candle. Terry gazes at the failing light, then tracks her eyes towards the trap
door in the roof.
A few more hollow THUMPS.
Terry is
petrified. She takes a step backward. The light flashes off and on again ...
creating a strobe light effect.
Behind her, the
elevator doors silently pull open.
Terry's gaze is
still focussed on the ceiling trap door. Behind her, the basement is pitch
black. She continues moving backwards towards the open elevator doors, step
after step, completely unaware ...
UNTIL SOMETHING
LEAPS OUT OF THE DARK AND GRABS HER.
In the moment
it takes to draw a breath and scream, it's already over.
The light goes
out.
INT. APARTMENT
BUILDING - UPSTAIRS HALLWAY - NIGHT
The lobby is
vacant and terribly still. The elevator doors remain closed, a few THUMPING
sounds coming from the shaft far below.
Then
nothing.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - NIGHT
The sound of a
PHONE LINE RINGING.
Julia is
sitting inside of the parked Range Rover, the cell phone pressed against her
ear.
MAN'S VOICE
(from
phone)
Hello?
JULIA
Hello ... is
this Mr. Alba?
MAN
Yes.
JULIA
I'm sorry to
call you so late ...
MAN
(overlapping)
Who is
this?
JULIA
This is Julia
Levin. We met a few days ago at graduation. I'm a friend of Terry's.
Beat.
MAN
Who?
JULIA
Terry. Your
daughter?
More
silence.
JULIA (cont'd)
Hello?
MAN
I don't have a
daughter.
JULIA
Excuse me?
MAN
You must have
the wrong number.
JULIA
(beat)
No, this is the
right number ...
CLICK! The MAN
hangs up the phone on the other line.
JULIA (cont'd)
Hello?
Julia stares at
the cell phone in stunned confusion, until a sharp pain courses through her
hand. She FLINCHES and nearly drops the phone. Julia checks her pricked
finger.
The WOUND HAS
GROWN. An infected red spot with a open hole in the center. The skin actually
seems to be rotting around it, allowing the wound to expand like a sinkhole.
INT. CORNER
MARKET - NIGHT
A small box of
aspirin are taken from the shelf.
Paul tightens
his fist around the box, shutting his eyes, fighting the excruciating the pain
in his head. He takes a deep breath and moves to the register.
CASHIER
Need anything
else?
PAUL
(weak)
No.
The cashier rings him up.
CASHIER
Four
thirty-two.
Paul flips open
his wallet. His face drops into shock.
There's nothing
inside his wallet. No credit cards. No money. No driver's license. Not a
thing.
CASHIER (cont'd)
Something
wrong?
Paul can barely
speak.
PAUL
Um ... I
must've brought the wrong wallet. Sorry.
Paul walks out
of the store.
EXT. CORNER
STORE - NIGHT
Paul stops
outside, running his fingers through his hair, digging them into his skull.
PAUL
(shaking
his head)
That's not
possible ... that's not possible ...
A SHAPE grabs
his shoulder. Paul spins around.
A HOMELESS BAG
LADY stands behind him. Pleading eyes. Dishevelled and caked with grime. She
holds up the drooping sleeve where a hand once was.
BAG LADY
Help me. They
took my hand.
Paul stumbles
back. Horrified.
BAG LADY (cont'd)
(weeping)
They took my
hand ...
Paul turns and
starts running. Faster than he's ever run in his life. Disappearing down the
dark street.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT
Small and
trendy. Young clientele.
INT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
Julia sits at
an empty booth. Staring at various black and white photographs of graduation.
The four friends are sitting together on the back porch, smiling for the camera.
She squeezes
her finger to help numb the pain, her mind turning.
JULIA
(to
herself)
Joey ...
(then)
Terry, what
were you talking about?
Julia flips to
another photograph. A picture of Julia, Paul, Sam, and Terry on the UCLA campus.
Dressed for graduation.
Julia shakes
her head. Her eyes are locked on the faces of her friends.
JULIA (cont'd)
There's four of
us. There's only four of us.
Beat.
She studies the
picture ... Beat. Julia sits up in her chair.
A revelation
crosses her face.
JULIA (cont'd)
(a
whisper)
Who took the
picture?
Julia looks
like she's falling into a deep hole. Her mind is racing for answers.
FLASHBACK: INT.
CABIN - LIVING ROOM - DAY
JULIA
I've been
fantasizing about a guy.
TERRY
Anyone we
know?
FLASHBACK: EXT.
CABIN - FRONT DRIVEWAY - NIGHT
The BLOND
STUDENT sits back on the hood of a sports car. The tattooed "S" insignia visible
on his shoulder.
TERRY (V.O.)
(cont'd)
There were five
of us. He came up in his own car.
FLASHBACK: EXT.
SAM'S HOUSE - GARDEN - DAYstyle="TEXT-TRANSFORM: none">
Paul smiling his killer grin at Julia. Wearing his
white shirt and gold and blue striped tie.
TERRY
(V.O.)
He was Paul's
best friend --
FLASHBACK: INT.
SAM'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - DAY
The BLOND
STUDENT loosens his gold and blue striped tie from his white shirt collar as he
undresses.
TERRY (V.O.) (cont'd)
-- they always
wore the same thing for Christ sakes.
INT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
CLOSE ON
Julia's HORRIFIED FACE.
JULIA
(completely
lost)
No ...
FLASHBACK: INT.
SAM'S HOUSE - BEDROOM - DAY
The BLOND
STUDENT standing half-naked in front of Julia. Holding a pair of ripped
jeans.
JULIA (cont'd)
I'm sorry. I
was just using the ...
(laughs)
Really. I'm
sorry.
STUDENT
I'll forgive
you this once.
FLASHBACK: INT.
CABIN - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Julia turns her
head and gazes at ...
THE BLOND
STUDENT ...
Sitting in a
chair. Smoking a cigarette. Smiling down at her.
TERRY
(V.O.)
It's just a
fantasy.
FLASHBACK: INT.
CABIN - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Candles have
been placed around the room. Paul and Terry are asleep on the floor.
Blood drips
over the SUPERMAN TATTOO on Joey's shoulder.
Julia slowly
awakens to the sounds of JOEY SCREAMING over sickening RIPPING SOUNDS like cloth
being torn in half.
There are silhouettes on the wall of THREE
FIGURES tearing off pieces of something in the room. Large flaps. Chunks. Moving
rapidly and ferociously.
Julia spots Sam
SCREAMING across the room.
SAM
(shrieking)
JOEY!
Julia turns her
head in the direction of the ripping and tearing sounds. Her eyes slowly widen
as her mouth drops into a soundless, petrified look of horror.
A hand with
midnight skin, six fingers, and punctured with steel rods covers her eyes.
INT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
A plate SMASHES
on the floor.
Julia is jolted
out of her thought, looks over to find a WAITER picking up the pieces. The
lights flicker in the shop. This unnerves Julia completely. She starts gathering
the photographs together.
She becomes
aware of the pain in her finger again. Looks at the scab.
JULIA
(a
whisper)
Terry's legs
... Paul's headaches ...
A thought
crashes like thunder in her head.
JULIA (cont'd)
Oh no ...
Julia quickly
grabs a knife from the table. She gets up and walks straight to the ladies
restroom.
INT. COFFEE
SHOP - RESTROOM - NIGHT
Cramped and
dirty. Julia holds her finger over the sink.
With the point
of the knife's blade, she begins digging into her finger. The pain is immediate.
Julia grimaces, tears forming in her eyes, as the wound blossoms bright red.
Blood drips into the sink.
Julia drops the
knife into the sink and pinches the wound. Squeezing hard.
A speck of metal flashes inSIDE the
wound.
Julia continues
squeezing, tears rolling, fingernails digging into the wound as ...
THE TIP OF A
METAL SPLINTER PUSHES UP THROUGH THE BLOOD.
Julia starts
pulling it out of her finger. The splinter rises from the wound ... and rises
... and rises ...
More blood
spatters into the sink.
Julia is
GASPING and CRYING as the pain becomes excruciating. The glittering splinter is
five inches long and growing.
The splinter is pulled out. It's seven inches
long.
Julia drops the
splinter into the sink. She moves away from the counter, back towards the living
room, unbelieving, horrified ...
She stumbles
towards the door.
INT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
Julia walks out
of the restroom. Stops cold.
Everyone in the
coffee shop is staring at her. The customers. The waiters.
The lights are
dimming. A lack of power.
Julia forces
herself to move. She goes to her table, picks up the photographs, and suddenly
notices that in the graduation pictures --
SAM AND TERRY
HAVE DISAPPEARED. ALMOST AS IF THEY NEVER WERE A PART OF THE PHOTOS. PAUL AND
JULIA ARE TOGETHER IN EVERY PICTURE -- ALONE.
Julia grabs the
photographs and turns around.
The customers
in the coffee shop are standing now. Their eyes are dark shadows. Something
about the way they stand is completely unnatural. All wrong.
Panic begins to
settle in. Julia quickly walks to the door.
WAITER
Julia?
She turns. The
waiter stands behind her. Eyes burning.
WAITER (cont'd)
(menacing)
Why'd you take
it out?
That's enough.
Julia gets the hell out of there.
EXT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
Julia bolts out
the door and rushes across the street. She reaches her car, disarms the alarm,
and gets inside.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - NIGHT
Julia drops the
photos into the passenger seat. Starts the car. The CELL PHONE RINGS. She
answers it.
JULIA
Hello?
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - MARKET STREET - NIGHT
Paul on a pay
phone. There's panic in his voice.
PAUL
Julia. It's
Paul.
JULIA
Where are
you?
PAUL
At a pay
phone.
JULIA
What about your
Dad?
PAUL
He wouldn't let
me in. He told me he didn't have a son.
(then)
Julia,
everything in my wallet's gone. Credit cards. Money. Driver's license.
Everything.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - NIGHT
INTERCUT
between Julia and Paul.
JULIA
Then it's
already started.
PAUL
What's
started?
Terrified beat.
Julia trains her eyes on the coffee shop.
JULIA
Listen. There's
not much time. They're watching me right now.
PAUL
Who is?
JULIA
Just listen to
me. There were five of us at the cabin.
(beat)
Your best
friend was with us. Joey. He had blond hair. He had a Superman tattoo on his
shoulder.
PAUL
I don't know
anyone named Joey.
JULIA
That's because
they erased your memory. If you remembered him ... if you remembered what they
did to him, you might run like Sam. That would make it hard for them to hunt you
down.
PAUL
Where's
Sam?
JULIA
He's dead.
PAUL
What?
JULIA
They killed
him.
PAUL
They?
JULIA
Monsters.
Paul can barely
stand up. His skull is pounding.
PAUL
Monsters?
JULIA
They really
exist, Paul. They use human beings for parts. Like machines.
PAUL
I can't take
this.
JULIA
What you saw in
the forest wasn't a hallucination. They've been watching us the entire time.
Following us.
PAUL
I can't --
JULIA
There's a
tracking device in your head. Right where the scab is.
Her words sound
chilling in the night air. Foreboding and deadly. Paul is filled with dread.
PAUL
My head?
JULIA
They want us
for parts. That's why they're tracking us. They take the skin and wear it.
PAUL
Just let me
think for a second.
JULIA
They already
got Sam and Terry. And now they're making us disappear.
(then)
Think about it.
Your wallet. Your father.
PAUL
It can't be
true.
JULIA
It is true!
We're next!
Paul becomes
upset. He nods with grave understanding.
PAUL
What are we
gonna do?
JULIA
We have to get
back home. They're all over the place, but we can make it.
PAUL
Okay.
JULIA
Where are
you?
PAUL
Just below
Union Square. Right near the cable cars. Where they turn them around.
JULIA
All right.
There's a subway station near there.
PAUL
I can see
it.
JULIA
Wait for me. At
the top of the stairs. I'll be there in five minutes.
PAUL
Okay.
JULIA
I love you.
PAUL
(in
pain)
I love you.
Please hurry.
Paul hangs
up.
INT. RANGE
ROVER - NIGHT
Julia tosses
down the cell phone. The car engine STOPS.
JULIA
What now?
She tries to
start the car, but it the engine won't turn over. Just as she's about to try a
second time, she looks out the windshield.
SEVERAL DARK
SHAPES STAND IN FRONT OF THE ROVER. WATCHING. THE CUSTOMERS FROM THE COFFEE
SHOP. SOME ARE STANDING RIGHT OUTSIDE THE DOOR. OTHERS ARE SILHOUETTED IN THE
STREET.
Julia
frantically tries to start the car again. No dice.
She rips open
the door.
EXT. COFFEE
SHOP - NIGHT
Julia takes off
running. The SHAPES pursue.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - NIGHT
Julia turns a
corner and runs straight into an intersection.
A HORN BLARES
as a BUS barrels towards her.
Julia barely
leaps out of the way as the bus SCREECHES to a halt, nearly running her down.
She rises to her feet as the bus starts moving again.
Several of the
passengers have their faces pressed against the windows. Watching her. Dark
circles around their eyes.
Julia keeps
going. The PURSUING CUSTOMERS from the coffee shop are marooned on the opposite
corner by traffic. They stand motionless. Watching her escape.
EXT. SUBWAY
STATION ENTRANCE - STAIRS - NIGHT
A long flight
of stone stairs leads down to the BART and MUNI stations below. Paul sits down
on the steps. Looking. Waiting.
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - MARKET STREET - NIGHT
Julia charges
down the sidewalk. Weaving past bystanders.
As she runs,
Julia brushes past THE LITTLE GIRL from Sam's graduation party. Standing
abnormally. She watches Julia race off into the crowd with cold, soulless
eyes.
EXT. SUBWAY
STATION ENTRANCE - STAIRS - NIGHT
Paul is sitting
still. His head cradled in his hands.
A SHAPE appears
in front of him. Paul looks up. Smiles.
PAUL
Hey ...
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - MARKET STREET - NIGHT
Julia races
across the intersection and streaks towards the subway station entrance.
EXT. SUBWAY
STATION ENTRANCE - STAIRS - NIGHT
Paul is nowhere
to be found. The stairs are empty.
JULIA
Paul?!
Julia looks
around desperately. She can't find him in the crowds on the sidewalks. She turns
and looks down the stairs towards the open entryway to the subway system.
Paul is walking
through the entryway. A friend with him is patting him on the shoulder. Just
after Paul has disappeared through the entryway, the friend turns around.
IT'S SAM.
His lips are
parched, pitch black eyes bulging, his features somehow more twisted and
unfamiliar. His face twitches as he stares coldly at Julia, and he runs.
Small pieces of metal drop from Sam's pants
legs as he disappears through the entryway.
JULIA
(cont'd)
PAUL!
She frantically
rushes down the stairs.
JULIA (cont'd)
THAT'S NOT
SAM!!! PAUL!!!
She rushes
through the entryway.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - UPPER LEVEL - CONTINUOUS
The upper level
is almost completely empty save a few kids and late-night commuters. Julia is
hysterical now. The first time we've seen her lose control.
She looks
around frantically. Spots Paul and Sam going down the escalator together.
JULIA
Paul!
Julia rushes
towards the turnstiles. Jumps them. A GUARD steps out of his booth.
GUARD
Hey! You need a
ticket! Hey!!!
She keeps
going.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - PLATFORM - NIGHT
Paul and Sam
reach the bottom of the escalators. They move towards the platform. The lights
start twinkling. Losing power.
PAUL
(confused)
I thought you
said she'd be here.
Sam smirks
back, mute ... and GRABS HIM BY THE THROAT.
The lights GO
OUT.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - ESCALATOR - CONTINUOUS
Julia bolts
down the escalator.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - PLATFORM - NIGHT
She reaches the
platform and rushes to the center.
There's nobody
else down there. The lights are flickering. Slowly, they return to normal.
JULIA
(calling)
Paul?!
No
response.
A train RUMBLES
through the station. Julia moves to the opposite side and looks.
Resting on the
tracks, leading into the tunnel, are a trail of metal pieces. Exactly like the
ones from the cabin.
Julia looks
back. The GUARD is coming down the escalator.
Without
hesitation, she jumps down to the tracks. Moving quickly and bending down to
avoid being seen, she rushes into the awaiting subway tunnel.
INT. SUBWAY
TUNNEL - NIGHT
Drowned in
shadows. An unnatural silence fills the tunnel.
Julia moves
cautiously amongst the tracks. Eyes scanning the darkness. Following the trail
of discarded metal.
A SHARP
HISSING.
Julia spins
around. A few more HISSING SOUNDS rise from electrical sparks on the tracks.
Blue light flashes within the tunnel. Then, it ceases.
She turns back
to continue her search, wind sifting through her hair, when she finds --
A LARGE
HOLE
At the base of
the subway wall. Julia reaches down and palms a few metal pieces at the base of
the hole.
She peers
inside. A dull flickering light flashes within.
Julia takes a
calming breath. She moves into the hole.
INT. CRAWL
SPACE - CONTINUOUS
A narrow and
claustrophobic space. Julia squirms through the confined space, pulling herself
towards the flashing light.
INT. CORRIDOR -
CONTINUOUS
Julia pulls
herself through another opening and finds herself standing in the threshold of a
corridor. Both the walls and floor are constructed of crude metal grates and
long pipes. Anything could be hiding within. Waiting.
She moves
slowly into the corridor, a STROBE LIGHT flickering around her. She gropes
towards another opening.
The sound of
her TERRIFIED BREATHING is slowly replaced by the RHYTHMIC HUMMING OF
MACHINES.
INT. STAIRWELL
- CONTINUOUS
Steam rises
from the pipes. Bathing the stairwell in mist.
The fluorescent
lights above are glimmering in the darkness. Julia stands at the top of the
stairwell. She can't even see the bottom of the steps.
Carefully, she
starts moving down. Her hand gripping the metal railing.
The HUMMING OF
MACHINES grows louder ...
Her foot
accidentally kicks a few pieces of metal on the steps. A light CLINKING as the
metal scatters down ahead of her.
The HUMMING OF
MACHINES is closer now. Just beyond the sheathing clouds of blue and white
mist.
The metal
railing is suddenly replaced by HUMAN BONES.
Julia pulls her
hand away from the railing. Looks skyward and discovers more BONES are being
used to brace the ceiling along with metal beams.
She stops.
Shutting her eyes in fear. Starts to lose control.
From somewhere
within, she manages to steady herself. Keeps going through the awaiting steam
curtain at the bottom.
INT. MAIN
HALLWAYS - CONTINUOUS
The steam parts
to reveal a dark space. Cold and damp.
Julia moves
into the main hallway, stumbling through a hallway that can best be described as
a living nightmare. Mammoth pipes and human skin has been fashioned together
into a wall, pulsating with the HEARTBEAT OF MACHINES that saturates the entire
hallway.
Steam jets into
the hallway intermittently from the pipes. Creating great clouds.
Julia is beyond
horrified. Her face registers a numbness. Complete and total astonishment.
Human bones and
body parts have been so expertly fashioned into the corridor that it's
impossible to distinguish where the organic ends and the mechanical begins.
She enters
another corridor. Her face is struck by a JET OF HISSING STEAM.
She presses
onward. Slipping past the skulls and littered metal on the floor.
Another BLAST
OF STEAM.
Something leaps
out of the middle of it.
Julia whirls
back around a corner, pressing flat against the wall as a BLACK SHAPE moves
through the steam. Unidentifiable features. Movements that suggest nothing by
chaos and madness.
The SHAPE
HISSES and CROAKS in the hallway.
Julia waits.
She doesn't even breathe. The HISSING stops.
She gradually
turns to peek back into the hallway where the thing once stood.
CLOSE ON
JULIA'S EYES
as she looks
around the corner. The shape has disappeared.
Carefully she
keeps going forward. Drenched in water and sweat. Slipping through the steam
clouds that mask another entrance.
INT. LAIR -
NIGHT
A massive room
where empty human skins are dangling from hooks, complete and preserved from
head to toe. The skins sway and rock gently in the draft. Thousands of them.
Julia moves
towards the center of the room.
A large
OPERATING TABLE awaits. But the surface of the table is sunken like a water
basin. Next to the table is a pedestal littered with BLOODY INSTRUMENTS. Cutting
tools. Knives. Curved hooks.
Julia notices
that Paul's torn clothes are resting at the foot of the table. Shirt shredded to
a rag. Sneakers orphaned nearby. Jeans spattered with blood.
Her breathing
quickens. Her heart POUNDING.
She reaches the
foot of the table. Paul is lying within the basin, completely naked and
partially covered with LITTERED BODY PARTS. Organs and entrails.
The basin is
filled with water and blood. An immobile form is resting next to him.
Julia moves
quickly. She tries to wake him up.
JULIA
Paul. Paul,
wake up.
He stirs. His
nose crinkles slightly.
JULIA (cont'd)
Wake up.
She grabs him
and lifts him up. He starts COUGHING.
JULIA (cont'd)
You've gotta
hurry.
(then)
Here ...
Julia grabs his
jeans. She helps him slide down from the basin and he pulls them on.
A skinned HAND
grabs hers. Julia yelps a SCREAM.
The other form
-- a thing in the basin -- rises
and turns. Slicked with blood. Empty sockets where the eyes should be. Mouth
falling open. A horror that shouldn't be alive.
Julia SCREAMS
again.
Her free hand
grabs a HOOK from the pedestal and swings the blade into the thing's neck. Blood
fountains up.
The thing
begins SHRIEKING.
With Paul
leaning on her for support, Julia rapidly heads for the door.
INT. MAIN
HALLWAYS - CONTINUOUS
Julia navigates
her way through the hallways. Moving blindly through sudden JETS OF STEAM, the
sound of MACHINES around them. Paul leans on her, his eyes remaining closed,
COUGHING and stumbling.
JULIA'S POV
Racing through
the halls. The steam clouds suddenly EXPLODING into her view.
INT. STAIRWELL
- CONTINUOUS
Julia reaches
the stairwell and helps Paul climb the steps. She looks back over her shoulder.
Nothing behind them.
INT. CORRIDOR -
CONTINUOUS
Julia stops at
the corridor opening. The strobe light FLASHES within. Clicking.
The corridor
looks empty. Nothing but pipes and shadows.
JULIA
We're almost
there.
Julia turns to
Paul and finds a face with glaring yellow eyes and metal teeth. He stares back
at her.
A moment of
sheer horror. Julia reels back into the corridor. Pressed flat against the wall.
Sliding towards the crawl space opening.
Paul starts
advancing into the corridor. Grinning with teeth that flash with every click of
the strobe light.
She keeps
sliding away ...
He grabs his
chest and RIPS IT OPEN, tearing the covering skin apart as he would a shirt. A
menagerie of human bones and metal are revealed behind it.
Julia tries to
scream. Eyes wide. She can't make a sound.
Paul tears the
skin covering his chest wider. Pulling it away. Stripping himself clean.
Julia reaches
the crawl space. Sliding down.
The last pieces
Paul's skin are torn off. The thing that had been pretending to be Paul stands
in his place.
Only brief
glimpses are allowed by the strobe light. An abysm of immemorial lunacy
consisting of fashioned human parts and twisted metal. A human heart beating
within exposed ribs. Bones combined with pulleys and rods. The face of a skull.
A contradiction of all matter and cosmic order.
Julia slips
back into the crawl space. Still trying to scream.
INT. CRAWL
SPACE - NIGHT
Julia drags
herself through the crawl space. Moving quickly. Panicked.
INT. SUBWAY
TUNNEL - NIGHT
Julia squeezes
herself through the exposed hole. She kicks to her feet and tears off into the
tunnel.
INT. SUBWAY
TUNNEL - STATION OPENING - NIGHT
Julia has
almost reached the platform opening for the train.
BEHIND HER, A
CHORUS OF PURSUING MONSTROUS SCREAMS RISE UP WITHIN THE TUNNEL.
INT. SUBWAY
STATION - PLATFORM - NIGHT
Julia runs
directly parallel to the subway platform. The lights alongside of her start
flickering and go out, one by one, as she advances.
THE HISSING AND
SCREAMING CONTINUES TO RISE.
She reaches the
opposite tunnel and grabs hold of the platform, pulling herself up. The platform
goes dark.
Appearing out
of the far tunnel are a DOZEN DARK SHAPES, scampering along the walls and
running on all fours across the tracks. Their characteristics barely
visible.
Julia kicks
back as the shrieking things bear down on her, yellow eyes flaring in the dark,
metal teeth flashing.
Julia tries to
run for the escalator, but the things cover the walls behind the tracks. Ready
to spring.
Finally, one of
the monsters does leap towards her ...
AND IS SMASHED
TO BITS BY AN APPROACHING BART TRAIN.
Reducing the
monster to a few vestiges of scattered metal. The other creatures on the tracks
are also run down.
Julia watches
as the train RUMBLES past. And then, silence.
Nothing is left
except for a few swirling newspapers. The lights flicker and come back to
life.
Rising up to
her feet, rescued from death by chance, Julia starts backing towards the
escalator. Her eyes locked upon the darkened tunnel before she turns and races
up.
EXT. SUBWAY
STATION ENTRANCE - STAIRS - NIGHT
Rain has
started falling again. Pelting the stairs.
Julia dashes up
the stairwell and sprints into the street. She doesn't look back.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. SAN
FRANCISCO - STREET - NIGHT
The rain falls
so heavily that it creates a dense, blue FOG which shrouds the entire
street.
Julia appears
through the storm, running towards a telephone booth on the street corner. She
rips open the door, steps inside, and slams the door shut.
INT. PHONE
BOOTH - NIGHT
She drops a few
quarters into the phone. Dials. And waits.
INT. LEVIN
HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Dark and still.
Lightning frames the windows. The picture of Julia and her mother rests near a
phone as the line RINGS.
Guy comes
downstairs and answers the portable.
GUY
Hello?
Static.
GUY (cont'd)
(bewildered)
Is anyone
there?
INT. PHONE
BOOTH - NIGHT
A flash of
LIGHTNING outside.
JULIA
Daddy? ... It's
Julia ...
(beat)
They might
still be around ... feeding on power from the phone lines. Can you hear me?
(beat)
... Dad?
GUY
(over
phone)
I can't hear
you. Hello?
Beat.
JULIA
Daddy, help me
... help me, please ...
INT. LEVIN
RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
More STATIC
resounds over the phone. Guy hesitates a moment, then returns the portable to
the cradle.
INT. PHONE
BOOTH - NIGHT
CLICK. The line
is abruptly cut off.
Julia begins to
cry. She covers her face with her hands. The tears roll through her fingers.
INT. LEVIN
RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Guy stares at
the phone for a moment. A strange
feeling. Something isn't right. He thinks a moment. Then shakes it off and heads
upstairs, moving directly past the picture next to the phone.
JULIA IS GONE.
VANISHED FROM THE PICTURE WITHOUT A TRACE. ONLY HER MOTHER REMAINS.
Lightning
flashes across the picture's glass frame.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. SAN
FRANCISCO - SUBWAY STATION - DAY
The afternoon
rush of people trying to get home.
A GROUP OF
THREE COLLEGE STUDENTS come down the escalator into the station. CONNOR is among
them, now eighteen and wearing a Berkeley sweatshirt. His friends are BARRY and
MIKE.
BARRY
Why the hell
didn't we bring the car?
CONNOR
You wanna pay
for gas?
BARRY
Better than
this shit. I hate BART.
MIKE
He has a point.
I made the mistake of trying to use the bathroom. What do these people do? Stand
with their ass hanging over the toilet and aim?
Connor checks
his watch.
CONNOR
We're late.
Party started an hour ago.
MIKE
We'll make
it.
BARRY
(trace
of sarcasm)
Yeah Connor.
Relax. We might get there right after the kegs dry out.
CONNOR
(resigned)
I should study
anyway.
A FEMALE VOICE
calls out from across the platform.
FEMALE VOICE
(O.S.)
Connor?
He turns around
and scans the crowd, locating a ragged figure that moves quickly towards him.
With her dirty clothing and sunken eyes, it takes a moment to register. This is
Julia. Her skin is pale. Her hair is stringy and knotted.
JULIA
I've been
looking for you.
CONNOR
What?
BARRY
(hushed)
Great.
MIKE
Just ignore
her.
JULIA
They tried to
get me. Several times. But I
managed to get away. I've always managed to get away.
A train rushes
into the station. Connor is speechless.
CONNOR
I'm ... sorry
..
JULIA
But you'll help
me. You will help me.
Connor raises
his hands and backs towards the train as the doors slide open. His friends are
already aboard.
CONNOR
I'm sorry.
JULIA
No, wait ...
it's Julia ... don't you remember?
He gets into
the train. His friends are laughing. Connor turns to his friends with a look of
smirking disbelief.
CONNOR
How the fuck
did she know my name?
BARRY
She heard me
say it.
CONNOR
Jesus
Christ.
JULIA
(overlapping)
It's Julia! I'm
your sister!
The doors slide
closed in her face.
INT. SUBWAY
TRAIN - DAY
Julia begins
beating on the doors to be heard. Connor and his friends are a little freaked
but they're still laughing at her.
JULIA
PLEASE! CONNOR!
I'M YOUR SISTER!
The train
starts to move. People inside move in front of the doors and block Julia's view
of her brother.
JULIA (cont'd)
PLEASE DON'T
LEAVE ME! CONNOR!
Julia runs
alongside the train. Still beating on the doors. Her face awash with tears.
JULIA (cont'd)
THEY'RE GOING
TO KILL ME!!!
(shrieks)
THEY
...!!!!
The train picks
up speed. Julia is left behind.
The grinding of
the wheels is heard as the train moves into the subway tunnel. The sound of machines drowns out every
other sound and consumes all.
BLACKOUT.
THE END